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by Lazarus B.
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August 21, 2007

Transcript of Live Chat with Starr Toth, Runner-up in the First Chapters Romance Writing Competition from Tuesday, November 6th from 2-3 p.m. ET

November 05, 2007 06:52 AM EST (Updated: November 06, 2007 08:29 PM EST)
views: 290 | rating: 10/10 (15 votes) | comments: 117

Converse live with Gather's rising Star--Starr Toth, the runner up in the First Chapters Romance Writing Competition!  Starr will answer all our questions about her marvelous novel, about her life as an author, about her experiences in the FCR competition, about her continued hopes and about what advice she might have for aspiring writers.

If you can't make it Tuesday for the chat but you have a comment or question for Starr--just post it below in the comment thread and I'll make sure it becomes part of the discussion.

 

Starr Toth – Trust Me

Starr Toth has been a writer all her life (yawn, we all say that) but never really found her creative muse until she bought a horse.  That's when she discovered where that elusive little bit of inspiration lives -- in the barn.  Cleaning stalls is a solitary (why does no one ever want to help?), contemplative activity, and the one where she gets her best ideas.  She started writing down the stories she dreamed up while cleaning stalls.  It began with mystery novels, then took a sharp turn into romance.  Ideas came even faster.  By the time she wrote "Trust Me", she had four horses and four times the manure to clean.  Her muse was fairly screaming at her.  That was a few years ago.  Since then Starr’s 2 daughters moved out and she and her husband live on their small farm with two horses, 8 chickens, 7 cats, and one dog.  And her muse, who still hasn't shut up. 
 

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Comments: 117

~Sia McKye~ Nov 5, 2007, 8:49am EST
Laz, you'll do a wonderful job with this. Starr thinks she is ordinary, but she is anything but ordinary. Some of the greatest stories come out of everyday living. Unfortunately, I will be flying to Washington DC when you do your interview, but my thoughts and cheers are with you both!

~Sia~
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Lori F. Nov 5, 2007, 9:18am EST
How exciting for her. I will try and be there.
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t b. Nov 5, 2007, 2:43pm EST
I just read the intro for Starr, very nice
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Claire C. Nov 5, 2007, 9:27pm EST
How exciting for Starr! I am so sorry I will miss it because I will be at work. Great intro though Laz!
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Sherrie H. Nov 5, 2007, 10:29pm EST
I'm so happy for Starr and will do my best to be there. You're a great encourager of people's talents, Laz. Thanks for all you do.
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t b. Nov 6, 2007, 1:57pm EST
I would like to ask Starr where the idea for this book came from. It seems so well thought out to me.
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 1:59pm EST
Good afternoon, friends, romance buffs, novelists, and all other folks who love literature and success stories. In a moment we'll begin a live chat opportunity with Starr Toth, the author of Trust Me, and the runner up in the recent First Chapters Romance Competition.

This is my first time to host a chat, and I'm excited as well as honored. I've admired Starr from the moment I found myself laughing in delight at her first chapter.

I'd like to ask one favor--please don't lurk! Post a hello and your questions so we'll know your with us! Also, please keep refreshing so you can stay with the conversation!
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:00pm EST
Starr, are you with us and ready to begin? And hello to every one else.
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t b. Nov 6, 2007, 2:01pm EST
Hello
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:01pm EST
Hi, Laz. And hello to Terry. I'll start with her question about the idea for the book. The whole book idea started with the opening scene. That's all I had, the heroine breaking in and getting caught by the hero. Everything built from that, sort of like writing by seat of the pants.
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Suzette Vaughn Nov 6, 2007, 2:03pm EST
Hello Starr.
Good looking chat Laz.
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:04pm EST
Hey, Stacy. Got a question?
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:04pm EST
Thanks, Terry for posting and being here. Starr, a friend of yours and fellow semi-finalist emailed me a question, posted below:

"Starr, I understand you have quite a bit of retail work experience. Having worked retail, I know you get to see lots of humanity in action. How do you think your work experience informs your fiction?"

Thank you and hope lots of people stop by!

Caren
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t b. Nov 6, 2007, 2:04pm EST
You seem to have a good handle on the behavior of the rich.
I loved the dialoge in the second chapter especially.
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Bridget Riley Nov 6, 2007, 2:04pm EST
Hi Starr, I'm wondering how long it took from conception to the completed manuscript? Who do you allow to read your drafts?
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Wendy C. Nov 6, 2007, 2:05pm EST
Hello Laz and Starr. First congratulations Starr, what an accomplishment.

Are you like me, with story lines constantly running through your head?
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:05pm EST
Hi, Stacy & Bridget; thanks for posting.
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:06pm EST
Wendy, my favorite Wombat! Thanks for posting.
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Patti S. Nov 6, 2007, 2:07pm EST
Hi Starr, congrats on the contract!!! Patti S
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:07pm EST
How does my work experience inform my fiction? Not at all! I have no interest in writing about anything resembling working at a dept. store. Probably like most people feel about their jobs. I suppose I see a lot of "characters" that I subconsciously use later.
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Robin Noack Nov 6, 2007, 2:07pm EST
Are you interested in other genres or do you think your niche is in romance?
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:08pm EST
Welcome, Patti.
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:08pm EST
Thanks for flying in, Robin.
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:09pm EST
Terry, I've known a few very rich people, but I don't find them any different than me. But dialog between men and women -- that's where the fun is, no matter how much money is involved.
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Karin Karhem Nov 6, 2007, 2:11pm EST
You mention that you think a lot about story lines while you are mucking out the stalls. In terms of the actual writing process, do you have set hours that you write? Do you have a special place to write?
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t b. Nov 6, 2007, 2:11pm EST
Your dialog, really was excellent. So full of charm..
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Wendy C. Nov 6, 2007, 2:11pm EST
Wouldn't have missed it Laz. Overwhelmed with questions yet Starr? Go Starr!
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:11pm EST
Wendy, I do find that scenes crowd my head - you too, huh? Plots are a bit more of a challenge. That's what takes so long when I write. Bridget asked how long the writing takes. "Trust Me" took a year. The next one, slightly less. I have a critique group of fellow romance writers. I highly recommend it.
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:12pm EST
Thanks for joining, Karin; and for your question.
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Kristen C. Nov 6, 2007, 2:12pm EST
Hi Starr~
Welcome! I had the unique opportunity to read your full manuscript, and I have to let everyone here know, they will NOT be disappointed. It's such a humorous, well-crafted story where the characters are so real they are practically jumping off of the pages. I literally couldn't put it down, and can't wait to see it IN PRINT!

What I'd like to know is how you hone your dialogue so well - the conversations between your characters are very realistic, and I continued to be impressed throughout the story with the freshness of your characters' voices, as well as their speech. How do you do it?
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Lori F. Nov 6, 2007, 2:13pm EST
I heard from the first chapers 1 contest winners one of the hardest parts after they won was keeping silent the couple of days until the winners were officially announced. Did you have the same experience?
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:13pm EST
Karin, you had to bring up the stalls! But it's true, doing solitary activities is when the ideas come. Housework works too, if no one else is home. The actual writing usually occurs late at night. I think because I like to have total silence, and everyone else is in bed. Writers are so finicky!
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:14pm EST
Welcome, Kristen. It's good to have the "owner" of the FCR competition with us. I appreciated being a participant. This brings up a question I wanted to ask Starr:

What advantages do you think being part of the FCR has given you?
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:15pm EST
You made it, Lori. Thanks!
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Jennifer Hodge Nov 6, 2007, 2:15pm EST
I also had the privilege of reading the full manuscript and I second all of Kristen's comments. I read it in one sitting.

I think that "Trust Me" would translate well onto the big screen. Who would you envision in the role of the main characters?
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:16pm EST
Thanks, Kristin! A plug for my book - cool! I didn't know you got to read it all, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.

That's a hard question, I don't really know how I capture realistic dialog, except to say that I write what I see. That is, I see the characters in my mind, like watching a movie. I just transcribe it. Dialog is the easy part for me. All writers are different, though.
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Lori F. Nov 6, 2007, 2:17pm EST
Lazarus no problem.


Starr has it sunk in yet?
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:17pm EST
Lori, I had to keep quiet about being in the final 5, and that just about killed me. I told my family, who are scattered around the country, and swore them to secrecy. But for the final choices, Gather wisely waited until Monday to tell us, then announced Monday night, so it wasn't too bad.
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:19pm EST
That's a wonderful, prescient question, Jennifer.
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Lori F. Nov 6, 2007, 2:20pm EST
Starr was this your only romance manuscript? And if not what made you decide to enter this one in the competition as opposed to another one?
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:20pm EST
Jennifer, I love people who want to make my book into a movie! Now if you could just suggest that to the right people in Hollywood...

Some of my friends on Gather have asked me the same question, about who I'd envision as leading actors in my story, and I really don't know. I found that I'm a bit unusual in that I can hear my characters in my mind, but I can't see them. Have no idea what they look like other than basic hair color, etc. You tell me who should play them!
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Patti S. Nov 6, 2007, 2:20pm EST
I"ve been in a critique group with Starr for awhile now and dialogue is definitely a strength of hers. She writes it beautifully (and no she didn't pay me to say this) I also get to present her with a crystal box engraved with the words First Sale at our next Greater Detroit RWA meeting since I'm the President.
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nisley D. Nov 6, 2007, 2:22pm EST
Congratulations Starr, I would like to know what kind of interaction you had with Gather Members during the competition, and also with Gather management and / or competition management. For instance . . . did you know how were you were in the voting, or only after each round. . how did that work? Also, did you get a lot of questions and feedback?
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Robin Noack Nov 6, 2007, 2:22pm EST
Starr, I'm always curious as to what writers have on their reading lists. What have you read recently that you can recommend?
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:22pm EST
Thanks for joining, Patti. And another congrats to Starr. Crystal Box. Engraved yet.
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:24pm EST
Hi, Patti!

Laz, it's starting to sink in, as I've been talking to my agent about my next book. Which leads to my answer to Lori's question, no, this is not my only manuscript. I have another one finished, and a couple more novels that were written as mysteries but that I would like to turn into romances. And a couple novels I've started and set aside for no good reason. Sometimes there are just more ideas than time.
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Sherrie H. Nov 6, 2007, 2:24pm EST
Hello Laz and Starr, and congratulations again! My question -- Is this the first book you've written? Have you started another, and if so, has the publisher shown interst in other things you've done or have in progress?
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Lori F. Nov 6, 2007, 2:24pm EST
I know writing is a very hard and often underappreciated profession who inspired you to keep going?
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Suzette Vaughn Nov 6, 2007, 2:25pm EST
Crystal Box...Congrats.
Only question before I run off here.
What can we expect as the second installment in Starr's best selling list that I expect Pocket will be grabbing up shortly.
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:26pm EST
Welcome nisley & Sherrie.
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:26pm EST
Nisley, I had no contact with Gather management during the competition except for the phone calls that let me know I was moving on to the next round. I did meet a lot of fellow-FCR writers on the Writing Wombats group, and I keep in touch with a group off-line that I critique with. I've met a ton of great people here, very talented.
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:28pm EST
Hi Robin. What have I read recently? I know you didn't mean to set up a plug here, but I've been reading "Fire Bell in the Night" and "The Way Life Should Be", both the winneres from the FC contest - honest! Before that, hmm...some sort of romance, I'm sure. My favorite authors are Susan Elizabeth Philips, Jennifer Crusie, and Tami Hoag.
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Lori F. Nov 6, 2007, 2:29pm EST
Starr and Laz I have got to run...Starr I am so excited for you...I know the judges had a hard time picking a winner with so many wonderful manuscripts...but IMO they made the right choice. I cant wait to pick up a copy of your book and read the rest.

You got here because you deserve it. Cant wait to see your name on the Bestsellers list.

Take care.

Lori
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:31pm EST
Starr, may I ask what you learned from the Gather FCR contest? About writing and writers, publishing and yourself as a writer?
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Sherrie H. Nov 6, 2007, 2:31pm EST
As one of the First Round Competitors, I wonder if you had a "strategy" for winning or if you are one of those cool-under-pressure people who are content to sit back and let what will be, be. I'm assuming you were an editor's pick, which has to be hugely flattering. Just curious what the actual competition felt like from your perspective.
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:32pm EST
Lori, as to who inspired me to keep going - good question. At times (when I got rejections, mostly) I wondered why I kept trying. But I like to write! And I think the support and encouragement I got from my critique partners was the most instrumental in keeping my writing. We all started out unpublished 4 years ago. Now 3 out of 5 of us are published! I can't say enough good things about critique groups.
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Kristen C. Nov 6, 2007, 2:32pm EST
Okay - Jennifer votes for Matthew McConnaughey for the Jack character. I thought someone George Clooney-esque (George is a bit too old I think!). We're still working on Ellie....
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Jennifer Hodge Nov 6, 2007, 2:34pm EST
Starr, After "Trust Me" is published, are there plans for a book tour?
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:34pm EST
Hard question, Laz, about what I learned. I guess I learned that there are even more great writers out there than I knew about, and I knew of a lot. I learned they are all as insecure as I am about their chances to get published. And I learned that I don't give up easily. If I did, "Trust Me" would still be sitting in the depths of my computer, collecting cyber-dust.
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Beaker (just Beaker) Nov 6, 2007, 2:36pm EST
Starr, your skilled pacing is what most impressed me about the chapters we've read. Do you write big and then cut, or do you write small and add on in later drafts--or is your revision process just minor tweaking?
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:36pm EST
Sherrie, I didn't have a strategy to win. I know a lot of people said we had to solicit votes, but I didn't do too much of that. And yes, I was an editors' pick each time. I'm not sure there is any strategy that will work outside of writing the best novel you can. I thought Meredith's was terrific, as were the other finalists.
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:37pm EST
I'm taking notes, Kristen! :-)
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:37pm EST
Thanks for the great questions, J.K.
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Karin Karhem Nov 6, 2007, 2:38pm EST
Starr, What are your goals as a writer? Do you want to quit your day job and write full time?
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t b. Nov 6, 2007, 2:38pm EST
Excellent question J.K.
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:39pm EST
I see Maggie Gyllenhal (think I misspelled her name) as Ellie. I has to be somebody who can walk around with a gun strapped to her thigh without being conspicuous.
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:40pm EST
Jennifer - a book tour? No one mentioned it, and I don't expect it. Although I'm sure I'll be pushing it heavily at book stores. Fortunately, I'm not far from Borders first store in Ann Arbor, MI. Maybe I can make use of that...

Someone asked about the topic of my next book. (Sorry, this is moving fast and I can't recall who) The next one my agent will see also concerns the rich and powerful, and is set in Washington, D.C. I don't know if it will be publilshed, but that's my next pitch.
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Layla Morgan Wilde Nov 6, 2007, 2:40pm EST
Hi Starr, congrats again! Hi, Laz, thanks for hosting. You gave a lovely critique for my semi-finalist entry, Peace, Love and Chocolate, thanks for that...

Starr, what your criteria for deciding which agent to sign with?
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:42pm EST
Welcome Wilde Layla and Linda.
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:42pm EST
J.K., about my writing pace: What I do is not something I've ever heard writers recommend. I tend to write a clean draft the first time. Not much adding on or cutting. Maybe a little tweaking. I've tried to do a rough draft, but it just doesn't work for me. If that one little word isn't right, I spend a half hour staring at it until I get it right. Like I said, it's not the recommended way!
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Bridget Riley Nov 6, 2007, 2:43pm EST
Hi Starr, I'm wondering how long it took from conception to the completed manuscript? Who do you allow to read your drafts?
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:44pm EST
Laz, good casting! We're getting somewhere now.

Karen, yes I'd love to write full time. I've cut back my working hours severely (my employer is very nice about it, and was happy for my success.)
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:45pm EST
Bridget, it's my critique group that reads the drafts. And my husband, who is my biggest fan. One of my daughters also likes to read the completed ms. (The other one isn't a romance fan; I'm working on that.)
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t b. Nov 6, 2007, 2:46pm EST
Starr, do you ever write about your farm and animals?
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:47pm EST
Talking about that "clean first draft," do you have any idea what to expect from the editorial team at Pocket?
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MaryAnne, Director of Member Services Nov 6, 2007, 2:47pm EST
Hi Starr,
I'm just joining the conversation, so I hope I'm not asking something you addressed already. How long did it take you to write your book? Did you start and stop, or once you had your opening scene did it flow pretty well?
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:48pm EST
You know, Terry, I have this theory that Starr was the editor's choice because hers was the only romance without a dog in it!
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:48pm EST
Welcome, MaryAnne
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:48pm EST
Layla asked about choosing an agent. First, I wanted one who responded enthusiastically to my first 2 chapters. Next, I was pleased to find an agent at Dijkstra who already had sold romantic suspense to Pocket Books, so had an established relationship there. Also, she had a plan for my future and how to guide it. I think I chose well!
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:50pm EST
Terry, No I've never written about farms or my animals. My friends have suggested it, but maybe I'm just too close to it to see what would be of interest to other people. So I ended up writing about rich and powerful people, which I assure you does not come from first hand knowledge!
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Sherrie H. Nov 6, 2007, 2:51pm EST
I have to chime in and agree with what you said about critique groups. I'm also a fan of Susan Elizabeth Phillips and Jennifer Crusie (I'll have to check out Tami Hoag) and am in a critique group called just Cherry Writers, formerly Jenny's Cherry Writers. It's been invaluable in my journey as a writer. We used to call getting critiqued by Jennifer Cruisie "getting our tires rotated". Having critique partners you trust to be honest is a great experience. I really appreciated the thoughtful comments (including Laz's) that I got from Gather members during the competition.
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:52pm EST
Laz asked about possible edits from Pocket. I'm still wondering about that, as I haven't heard from them yet on that subject. I'm not really worried, as I'm just thrilled to be working with such a talented group of people and am looking forward to a long career with them!
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t b. Nov 6, 2007, 2:53pm EST
I want to say congratulations on a job well done Starr. From what I have read, I think your book is excellent!
I highly approve of the way you handled yourself through out the competition, and am wishing you continued success in your writing.
It is your gift to us.
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:54pm EST
While we're waiting for Starr to catch up with all the questions, I suggest that if you have a Borders nearby, and you're willing to put Starr up during the book tour that she didn't know we're planning for her, you send her an email and let her know.

Last night my wife said it would be okay if we hosted her here in Winston-Salem.
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:54pm EST
Hi MaryAnne, yes, I mentioned that the book took about a year to write. But as for starting and stopping...no, I think one scene just felt like it flowed into the next.
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Elsie Duggan Nov 6, 2007, 2:54pm EST
Hi Star, Congratulations on your win, I am very happy for you.
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:56pm EST
Welcome, Elsie--my role model! And belated happy birthday!
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:56pm EST
Cool, Laz! Looks like I'm planning a vacation for next fall!

Seriously, I'll be talking to other writers, my agent, and my editor about book signings and what they recommend. I have no experience at this.
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Elsie Duggan Nov 6, 2007, 2:56pm EST
I know I am late here, but just came on and saw the message, and I want to wish you much success in your writing career.
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:56pm EST
Thanks, everyone, for your congratulations and for stopping by. And for reading and voting during the contest! Much appreciated.
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 2:57pm EST
Okay, folks, it's getting close to what we call "burning desire" time. I know you have a question you're just dying for Starr to answer--or one we overlooked. What else would you like to ask?
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 2:59pm EST
While there's still time, thanks for hosting, Laz.
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Elsie Duggan Nov 6, 2007, 2:59pm EST
I have just been reading all the comments and I think your chat went very well Lazarus, and Starr, again, my best wishes to you.
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 3:00pm EST
This was so much fun for me. You're very gracious. And, like Ellie, you can really think on your feet!
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t b. Nov 6, 2007, 3:00pm EST
I enjoyed this very much. Thank you Starr, for sharing your thoughts with us and thank you also to Lazarus for hosting.
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Starr A. Nov 6, 2007, 3:00pm EST
Thanks, Elsie. Now back to editing my next novel...
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Lazarus B. Nov 6, 2007, 3:01pm EST
Please remember, "Trust Me," by Starr Toth, someone you know personally, a romance novel soon to be published by Pocket Books. Thanks everyone!!
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Sherrie H. Nov 6, 2007, 3:02pm EST
Thanks for taking the time to chat, Starr. And thanks, Laz, for hosting. You both did a great job.
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