This is excellent...really breathtaking how you've covered a life's story so well...
I thought there were a few rough spots, contrary to Stephanie above; expecially with the longer lines...however, overall it does have a good rhythm that moves you forward. I'm glad I found this one, especially...
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I thought there were a few rough spots, contrary to Stephanie above; expecially with the longer lines...however, overall it does have a good rhythm that moves you forward. I'm glad I found this one, especially...
Keep writing and keep sharing!
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