by Mark M.

Member since:
October 26, 2007

Red Clay

November 02, 2007 08:06 AM EDT (Updated: November 09, 2007 04:56 PM EST)

views: 33 | rating: 10/10 (6 votes) | comments: 6

Excluded

Then, from all boasting;

Dim dismay;

Extruded,

Dumb, red clay; merely hosting

Precious, gracious life.

Tags: boasting, clay, gracious, shadorma, life, poetry, precious

To Groups: .....The Poetry Review....., Clear Minds Create, First Time Writers., God 101, Poets Nook, Reaching for God, Sceptical Inquiry

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Comments: 6

Michelle K. Nov 2, 2007, 9:11am EDT

Thank you for the information. I'll write it down and give it a try once the coffee kicks in...

Tara R. Nov 2, 2007, 9:45am EDT

Very interesting Mark...I can see how it could become addictive. Especially for those who are already "addicted" to words.

Marge H. Nov 2, 2007, 10:14am EDT

Says so much in so few words. Just beautiful!

carolyn b. Nov 2, 2007, 12:37pm EDT

Thank you

TK Rosevear Nov 2, 2007, 7:48pm EDT

Very interesting Mark, thanks ;)

J W. Dec 14, 2007, 11:53am EST

good poem


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