Chrysalis of Spring

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Deborah O. Oct 29, 2007, 2:15pm EDT

nice imagery, is this the beginings of something new? Keep on going ;-0

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Human, Katherine, seeker of intergalactic life, inhabitant of Earth Oct 29, 2007, 6:08pm EDT

Lovely

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Clyde Grauke Oct 29, 2007, 8:15pm EDT

Well Deborah, I guess it may be the beginnings of something new...better than just dusting off the old ones. I did this today right at the end of my lunch hour. Kind of fun to pull one out of my hat like that.

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dianne j. Oct 30, 2007, 10:06pm EDT

I agree, it would be a great beginning. But it also stands well as it is.

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Clyde Grauke Oct 30, 2007, 10:35pm EDT

Oh I see, I took your meaning wrong. This was meant to be a stand alone and complete poem in the generic haiku syle. I was thinking you were meaning: was it the beginning of my writing something on the spur of the moment on the basis of the Write Image photo prompt...which is what I did. I seldom do things like that.

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Sheila Deeth Oct 31, 2007, 5:40pm EDT

Nice. I like the idea of latent spring.

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Beth H. Nov 4, 2007, 1:00pm EST

I love haiku. Seemingly simple but always full of meaning in just a few words. Very nice.

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Laura M. Dec 15, 2007, 10:38pm EST

The spring birth awaits its moment that is not in complement to brittle branches' stage....but the many seasonal voices all eventually have their say and honor the patient cycles' wisdoms. The activated pond/mirror is luscious in this.

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April H. Dec 30, 2007, 5:57pm EST

This is truly wonderful

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