WOUND.

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Sandra T. Oct 20, 2007, 3:39pm EDT

Very emotional. Great haiku.

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Gorgeous Gabby, a Gather Geeky Gal, and The Giz Oct 20, 2007, 3:51pm EDT

Awwww, too sad.

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Gorgeous Gabby, a Gather Geeky Gal, and The Giz Oct 20, 2007, 3:53pm EDT

Terry, if you take pictures of the Ice Palace can you make it dark?

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Corinna Parr Oct 20, 2007, 4:51pm EDT

Thank you for the connection, Terry. James Ciriaco had directed me to some of your poetry, and I've been enjoying reading it.

This, though... this hits a little close to home. Separate of memory, I think it's powerful in its own right.

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Heather W. Oct 20, 2007, 5:04pm EDT

This is hauntingly sad.

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Cheryl W. Oct 20, 2007, 5:38pm EDT

So sad...

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Heatherrrr Eloise Oct 21, 2007, 7:48am EDT

this gave me chills.
haunting.
indeed, great haiku.

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Corina Carrasco Oct 23, 2007, 6:01am EDT

Very real emotions in this one.
And yes, we do break and we are left empty and cold and alone in the middle of a crowd.

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zale orcid Oct 29, 2007, 10:41am EDT

.excellent.

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Dena Straughn Nov 2, 2007, 4:44am EDT

Nothing as horrifying, as terrifying, as the kiss on the cold, still, white brow

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