by Nina A

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June 23, 2007

Without Home

October 17, 2007 03:17 AM EDT

views: 42 | rating: 9.9/10 (12 votes) | comments: 12

Lillie brain blossoms. There's no room for thought. She never goes home.

She doesn't know where home is anymore.

She never goes home.

Hope is just the silver lining, but she can't lasso it down.

All ideas turn to dust; giving up on all of us. She never goes home.

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Comments: 12

Michelle R. Oct 17, 2007, 9:33am EDT

Lonely and heartbreaking. Good work.

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denise e Oct 17, 2007, 6:49pm EDT

nice

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Austin Cushing Oct 17, 2007, 9:22pm EDT

Not bad -- I'm not sure I'm fond of it, but I think it just might not be my preferred style, is all. ::wry grin::

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Sherry W. Apr 24, 2008, 2:16pm EDT

Hmm, this is an interesting piece of verse.

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Amy P. Apr 28, 2008, 11:29am EDT

Nice one.

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Angela W. Apr 28, 2008, 1:33pm EDT

10

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Jodie P. Apr 28, 2008, 1:44pm EDT

Nice

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☆ ƒåitĥ ☆ Apr 28, 2008, 1:46pm EDT

I think this is very interesting.

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Renda B~surviving the storm by dancing in the rain. Apr 28, 2008, 3:29pm EDT

Nicely done.

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Austin Cushing May 5, 2008, 1:38am EDT

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Shelbia C. Sep 1, 2008, 7:26pm EDT

This is a good one

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