Love Is In The Air(Poetry Please; wind)

The wind,

soft against my skin,

as I lay bare,

the truth between us.

Our hearts,

pounding hard as one,

with raw confessions made.

Your eyes,

blue as fair horizons,

sees the joy.

Our entwined hearts,

leap,

with new hope.

I am thankful,

for those first kisses,

blown,

one to the other-

and, because the wind

carried them safely,

within our reach,

our souls touched.

Passion stirred,

between us,

and love sought to capture,

all the wonders,

of the wind.

Comments: 22

Shelly W. Oct 12, 2007, 8:23am EDT

Lovely, romantic, emotional, heartfelt, passionate, everything I like! haha

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Jamie ~grant me the serenity..~ G. Oct 12, 2007, 8:30am EDT

Very well done. :D

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Mary McCartt Oct 12, 2007, 10:16am EDT

So pretty and lyrical.

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Barbra L. Oct 12, 2007, 7:28pm EDT

I loved the naturalness of this, Virginia. You've painted the wind of part of this beautiful relationship. Lovely!!

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Sheila Deeth Oct 12, 2007, 8:55pm EDT

Beautiful - a relationship touched with the gentleness of a passing breeze. Loved it.

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Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Oct 13, 2007, 12:25am EDT

Passionate...and powerful

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Beth H. Oct 13, 2007, 1:02am EDT

Strong imagery that evokes strong emotions. Very nice.

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Terry Collett Oct 13, 2007, 5:01am EDT

Fine poetry.

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Virginia M. Oct 13, 2007, 6:47am EDT

Thank you all, for your comments. Hearing from a fine bunch of writers, such as you, is encouraging, and very appreciated!

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Tracey W. Oct 14, 2007, 9:24am EDT

Virginia, I truly loved this! I has raw power, emotion and sensuality.

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Corinna Parr Oct 14, 2007, 9:45am EDT

As tender as the sentiment expressed here is, you've also done a great job of connecting the power of love to that of nature. Very nicely done.

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Barbra L. Oct 14, 2007, 10:24am EDT

Virginia: You've painted a picture of 'naked truth' with a fine brush of eloquence of thought. Beautiful!

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Mary Z. Oct 14, 2007, 10:58am EDT

outstanding imagery, Virginia! Not only did the words flow but the eye also moved with the wind.

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William Dotani Oct 17, 2007, 1:59am EDT

Sensual and romantic. I like the subtle metaphor that gives a glimpse of the past within the confines of the present moment. You did so without disrupting the timeline.

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Elizabeth Madrigal Oct 17, 2007, 1:59pm EDT

So wonderfully romantic... I love it!

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Leah A. Oct 21, 2007, 11:36am EDT

beautiful poem

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Elsie Duggan Oct 22, 2007, 12:14am EDT

I love romance and this poem is so full of it, wonderfully done Virginia

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William Dotani Oct 28, 2007, 7:07am EDT

Reread. The following lines are so beautiful and gentle:
I am thankful,

for those first kisses,

blown,

one to the other-

and, because the wind

carried them safely,

within our reach,

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