It is a long night of winter.
I’m watching the sky.
The rays of The moon is presenting
Their pleasing dance on the glittering stage of water.
The crystal clear water is mirroring the moon
That seems to swim along with my shadow.
The moonbeams are piercing their dark leaves
Just as the arrows of just injured a devotee’s heart.
The beauty of the starry sky is also overpowering this.
I have lost in watching the hide and the seek game of the moon
Moreover, the stars behind the patches of the clouds.
My heart is humming strange love song
The sweet sound is floating rhythmically and disappearing in distance.
After a while I go to bed.
I’m trying to grope in the dark of the heart.
There are my loneliness and I.
In shelter of dreams,
I’m waiting for some one.
With whom
I’m dreaming.
In the desert of heart,
I am growing a garden of love.
There are dark dense clouds of her locks.
Blowing of cool breeze is exhaling my soul and body.
Lightning is flashing in the sky of her eyes.
In shadow of the eyelid
From the window of eyes
I am making the rain of tears.
These tears are dripping this garden.
The plants of wishes are sprouting.
Now plants have become trees.
We wish to have sweet mangos of hopes.
Sudden of the moment,
A big storm of bad luck,
Breaks my dream and
Again my loneliness and I,
Are together to give company each other.


Comments: 23
and it was quite a while ago. It is so similar to that. It seems
I am reading that other poem but I still like it Raj.
THG
God bless.
Youre quite a writer.
I see several phrases of exceptional beauty, startling even:
In the desert of heart/I am growing a garden of love.
We wish to have sweet mangos of hopes.
From the windows of eyes/I am making the rain of tears.
This is sweetly simple but complex with image, very nice.
well written, wonderfully done, keep writing & share , you have a lot more inside I can tell. Thank you for directing me here, best wishes, I am so glad I have been given a little more information about you, share. Your poem touched me, tears left un-cried till now, greatest one so far. Reach deeper into your heart & soul, talk within it. I am speechless. Touching ... Sandy is right a big huge star in the making of great talented words of poem, truly gifted, gift given by God is share with all, art piece.
Blessings always.
God Bless
Thanks for stopping in my dear sweet friend.
Heartfelt poetry, I think she must be a beautiful person and a lucky one too!
Thanks...S
Whatever may truly be the loss/lost, this is a lovely poem. Thankyou for sharing this! :)
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