Jack and Jill went up the hill to fetch a pail of water
born on the same day
inseparable since birth
both always had a say
about what went on in
the other’s life. toddler
days were not to be seen
for sometime now, even
childhood was left behind
adolescent feelings driven
to core. hormones bubbled
jumping forth. unfamiliar it
was too. step that stumbled
was no surprise. climbing hill
was but only an excuse. dread
after the deed added to thrill
to escape from parent's fury
they fell and faked self-injury!


Comments: 12
i like it ..its on the lines of what we used to sing in college
"jack and jill went up the hill to fetch a pail of water
they came back after 9 months with a lovely daughter"
I like the story retold and bold!
Even Ring a Ring of Rosies has a total different meaning to what I thought.
Hahaha Amar...you're funny.