While I was reading some articles last night I came across one from Ester about Magic and what you believed. I sent her a comment stating that, yeah, I think everyone has a sense of magic in them. But, by my definition, magic doesn't mean having the power to cast spells or make yourself float in midair...to me magic is about emotion, how strong your heart is, how strong your bond with everyone and everything around you. I've always felt I've had a strong intuition and it's gotten me out of some pretty hairy situations. I also used this intuition when I write....which makes me a "panster" , meaning I write by the seat of my pants. :-P
In my novel (and contest entry) Dark Obsession I end chapter two with the sentence *It was the look of someone who had just seen the dead.* In a very glowing and very kind comment, Sammie A said::
I love this ending. It really ties this chapter in with the first one with such a perfect twist of irony after him seeing his dead grandmother. I wonder, did you intend that when you wrote it, or was it just something that you realized afterwards?
And, well I guess I have to say, yes and no. When I write, I always, always look for a way to end a chapter that has the reader saying "No..don't stop! What happens next?!" because your goal as a writer is to keep those pages turning! The best compliments any writer can get is...."I lost sleep because of you!" or "I burned dinner because of you!" It's what we thrive for....what I thrive for. So, when I'm giving you a story I want to make sure that you're forgetting everything around you!
Anyway....I rambled....as for Sammie's question and that particular scene I based it on something I once experienced when I lived far away from my family. (you know what they say....WRITE WHAT YOU KNOW) I was working at a grocery store (in NY) and stocking shelves one morning when I turned around to see a woman standing in the aisle....she was shopping...not doing anything creepy like staring at me...but I had to do a double take when I saw her because she looked exactly like my aunt Delores....my mother's older sister who raised me from the time I was sixteen until I moved out at eighteen (I had lived with another aunt and uncle a few years before that---it's a different story though). Anyway, the woman continued shopping and I followed her into another aisle, but when I looked at her again, she didn't look anything like my aunt. A few days later, I found out that my aunt had had a heart attack (she'd been ill for a few years already but had been healing fairly well).
Growing up (and most anyone of Mexican/Latina decent will confirm this) we heard a lot of stories about ghosts and spirits and magic. It made for facinating ways to scare each other, as well as build our imaginations at play time (since we didn't actually have toys to play with). And, as I mention in another wip, you can't be born or raised near Mexico without believing the possibility that the magic existed. So, I've used this magic to help build my stories of suspense (most times around a central love story) and keep the reader intrigued, turning pages, and burning dinner. The First Chapter's contest (and subsequent second round) has given me that platform to see just how well this book will do once I publish it...and for that...I'm grateful!
Thank you all for reading! (even if I seemed to babble...not enough coffee yet!) ;-)


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I belief that if you are ready to believe in something magical, it will happen. Well. my life kind of proves that.
I even wrote and article Love or Magic?
Terri...do you have a link to your novel Dark Osession? I'd love to read what you've sent in.
I'll look forward to hearing if you liked it.
Terri
please stop by and vote on Dark Obsession–Chapter Two
I sure hope you're right...cuz it ain't looking too good right now. :-P
And I've got a degree in Engineering Physics and my father was a scientist. That doesn't mean I can't believe in magic. I don't see how you can have a baby and not believe in magic, whatever name you call it.
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As for me, I do believe. To point to what Stephanie B. said just a few comments ago, my ex-fiance was able to relieve my headaches occasionally, which was odd. I never questioned him about what he could do; just accepted it.
Also, he and I had some kind of odd connection that I'm not entirely convinced has broken, though we split up three years ago. He'd respond to my thoughts before I could even speak, or else he'd sign onto AIM, and I'd immediately feel that something wasn't right.
I frequently have premonitions and precognitive dreams: In 2001, I had two dreams of being in a car crash; something like six months later, I was. (Don't worry; I only had a couple of really bad bruises.) And I've had a few far-from-ordinary experiences that have convinced me of the existence of ghosts.
Of course, I also believe in vampires. Haha! I really do. Don't ask why; I just do.