[Rich Note: Here’s another one of those “first two lines begging for a ‘perfect’ third line” (RE: “The Aware Presence I AM Conscious of Being…” was the last one I threw out on the table) that I so enjoy "playing with." So I can't resist opening the "playground" to anyone who might like to offer themselves as a vessel for a “potentially perfect” haiku.]
[Rich Note: Of course, if you choose to do so, whatever you "thing or feel" is a “good closer” is quaranteed to “be perfect” from at least one perspective (and perhaps many).]
“Pure Awareness of
Being Consciously Present”
Is what we all seek.
“Pure Awareness of
Being Consciously Present”
Restores Peace and Joy.
“Pure Awareness of
Being Consciously Present”
Saves me from myself.
“Pure Awareness of
Being Consciously Present”
Sets the Captives free.
“Pure Awareness of
Being Consciously Present”
Restores Paradise.
“Pure Awareness of
Being Consciously Present”
Is a Quantum State.
“Pure Awareness of
Being Consciously Present”
Is the Highest State.
“Pure Awareness of
Being Consciously Present”
Is with me always.
“Pure Awareness of
Being Consciously Present”
Is What We All Are.
[Rich Note: Once again, I invite any and all to add their own “third line” and/or of let me know which of those presented above resonates best with their heart?]
[Rich Note: Biblically speaking, “Thou wilt show me the path of life; In thy presence is fullness of Joy; at thy right and are pleasures for ever more”( Ps. 16:11).]
© 2007 RFHay
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Comments: 12
"Pure Awareness of
Being Consciously Present"
lifts weight of worldly concerns
thanks again.
Terri
Dark Obsession