by ONY ME
Member since:
May 13, 2007

WE BELONG.....POEM!!!!

September 21, 2007 03:43 PM EDT
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     WE BELONG

The bond is there
and the feelings too,
you captivate me
and draw me in too.

We share the same dreams
we seek the same thing,
only time will tell
what the future may bring?

You would take my hand
so tender but strong,
make me feel safe
and know i belong.

In turn i would please you
in all that we do,
to prove that your soulmate
is devoted to you.

We'd know we belonged
by the feelings inside,
we'd feel so complete
it could'nt be denied.

Free spirits together
just roaming free,
is it possible we're soulmates
destined to be?


            ONY
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Comments: 89

J. G. Weddle Sep 21, 2007, 3:46pm EDT
Very good work. Thanks for sharing.
~*Jackie Ferrari*~ Sep 21, 2007, 3:47pm EDT
Ahhhh.....LOVELY ONY

Where have you been young lady? I have not seen you around lately.

Hugs to you and I TRULY love this poem.

J
Donald Hawley Sep 21, 2007, 3:47pm EDT
Very Nice. I like it.
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 3:48pm EDT
Many thanks J. G. Weddle.
Gerry Wass Sep 21, 2007, 3:50pm EDT
A very open and sweet declaration of your feelings, Ony. Did it get the response you hoped for?
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 3:51pm EDT
Thank you Jackie F, that means alot to me. I havent been around much lately as i havent been too well. But i always check back here most days. Thanks for taking the time to stop by and comment. Glad you liked it.
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 3:52pm EDT
Thanks Donald glad you liked it.
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 3:54pm EDT
lol, Reena...ive been lost all my life. Thanks for stopping by.
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 3:56pm EDT
Thanks for stopping by Gerry Wass......no it has'nt got the response i hoped for, as im still looking....lol
Janet H. Sep 21, 2007, 4:03pm EDT
I don't usually care too much for poetry but I really like your poem. Its simple and sweet and something I can understand. (Some poetry is so deep that my little brain can't handle it.)
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 4:11pm EDT
lol, Janet your comments and time are much appreciated.
Marge H. Sep 21, 2007, 4:20pm EDT
Hi Ony. Good to see you around Gather again. Lovely poem.
Bridget ♥ Sep 21, 2007, 4:24pm EDT
This is beautiful ONY! I haven't seen you around in awhile, it's nice to see you again! I've missed you! :)
ChrisJerri S. Sep 21, 2007, 4:28pm EDT
Loving poem
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 4:29pm EDT
Thanks Marge, glad you liked the poem.
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 4:32pm EDT
Hiya Bridget....so glad you stopped by and glad that you liked the poem. Im never far away and i always check on here most days. Missed you also, take care.
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 4:33pm EDT
Many thanks ChrisJerri.
destiny k. Sep 21, 2007, 6:02pm EDT
WOW! WHAT A ROMANTIC POEM! REALLY A HEARTWARMING POEM!! THANKS FOR SHARING! ^_^
Larry H. Sep 21, 2007, 6:07pm EDT
Thanks for sharing your poem
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 6:26pm EDT
Thank you Destiny, nice of you to say so and thanks for stopping by.
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 6:27pm EDT
Thanks for dropping by Larry.
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 6:29pm EDT
Such kind words Jerry S.......glad you liked it and thanks for your comment.
Jerry S. Sep 21, 2007, 6:29pm EDT
I didn't just read "We Belong," I felt "We Belong."
Free Spirit or the guy next door ~. Sep 21, 2007, 6:40pm EDT
How lovely, full of emotion for that special one who ever he is or dare I guess---what would he look like this man in this poem, what would this person have to due to melt each others souls together. The flow of this poem is like stitching together ones hope and dreams into one and then bonding them with my heart....Such a great poem Ony and How did I miss it....xxxx
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 6:51pm EDT
You should have recognised it Ron my American love....i sent it to you......lol
Im sure you can imagine what the guy in the poem looks like. So glad you stopped by. XXXX
Alison Pearce Sep 21, 2007, 7:14pm EDT
Very touching
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 7:39pm EDT
Many thanks Alison.
Free Spirit or the guy next door ~. Sep 21, 2007, 8:09pm EDT
Yes, I have seen this poem before, If I looked into the mirror would I see him? Such sweet words Ony my British Love---For every day there is a night, for every soul there is a mate, for you there is me my British love....xxxx
DANICA R. Sep 21, 2007, 8:19pm EDT
Very nice. I really like this, and so much meaning! Thanks for sharing.
Jerry Owens Sep 21, 2007, 8:19pm EDT
Very nice poem. Haven't heard much from you, missed you!
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 8:38pm EDT
Loving your words Ron my American love....keep it up, flattery will get you everywhere...lol
Yep, get yourself a mirror and you will see my soul mate. Love always, your British love.
XXXX
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 8:40pm EDT
Many thanks Danica for your kind comments.
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 8:42pm EDT
Hiya Jerry Owens, ive missed you too. Thanks for stopping by to comment.
Deb D. Sep 21, 2007, 9:22pm EDT
THERE you are! Nice to see you back.

Thanks for sharing straight from the heart.
Jerry S. Sep 21, 2007, 9:23pm EDT
Ony, I just want you to know I came back to read it again.
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 9:26pm EDT
Thanks Deb, yes im still around im afraid...lol
Thanks for stopping by to comment.
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 9:28pm EDT
That is pleasing to hear Jerry S. Glad you like it enough to return and take another look. Thanks for stopping by, you are always welcome.
dianne j. Sep 21, 2007, 9:30pm EDT
Lovely sentiment Ony. I hope you find him.
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 9:32pm EDT
Thanks Dianne, i doubt it but we can all live in hope....lol
Troy W. Sep 21, 2007, 9:45pm EDT
Very nice!
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 9:47pm EDT
Thanks Troy.
Free Spirit or the guy next door ~. Sep 21, 2007, 11:44pm EDT
I hope you find him to Ony, my mirror just broke, when I found out you doubt you will but hope...what more can I say my British Love....(,,,,,,,,,,,,,,) those are tears, I feel so hurt and alone.......LOL
ONY ME Sep 21, 2007, 11:47pm EDT
Ahh Ron but you know only too well ive found him and there's a new mirror on the way....lol
No need to feel hurt and alone anymore, im here always.
Angie O. Sep 22, 2007, 1:32am EDT
Great rhyming and topic and yes I think soulmates. Good job!
ONY ME Sep 22, 2007, 1:37am EDT
Thanks Angie for taking the time to stop and comment.
Quinn (aka Entwife) Blackburn Sep 22, 2007, 10:05am EDT
..
U wishing you laughter
Alainia~ Tha one n only~ a. Sep 22, 2007, 11:11am EDT
Great job! I hope one day I will find one!
ONY ME Sep 22, 2007, 11:14am EDT
Thank you Alainia.....im sure you will. But it will be when you're not looking and when you least expect it. Thanks for stopping by.
Jerri H. Sep 22, 2007, 2:19pm EDT
Beautiful
ONY ME Sep 22, 2007, 2:23pm EDT
Many thanks Jerri H.
Sandy (back in Ohio...blah!) Sep 22, 2007, 2:49pm EDT
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I love this poem. very beautiful
ONY ME Sep 22, 2007, 3:02pm EDT
Thanks Sandy....very nice of you to say so.
P.W. Dowdy Sep 22, 2007, 10:06pm EDT
Ony,
Thank you for this jewel of a poem. Fresh, clean, pure...like all of your work.
Great to hear from you again.
Pat
ONY ME Sep 23, 2007, 4:18am EDT
Thank you P. W. Dowdy very nice of you to say. Glad you liked it.
robert w. Sep 23, 2007, 6:48am EDT
Very beautiful Ony. Is it possible to have more than one
soul mate? God bless, rpw
ONY ME Sep 23, 2007, 6:50am EDT
Thanks Robert for your comments. As for it being possible to have more than one soul mate, in my mind you can only have one.
Sandra L. Sep 23, 2007, 4:04pm EDT
Thank you for sharing your lovely poem. I truly enjoyed it.
ONY ME Sep 23, 2007, 4:16pm EDT
Many thanks Sandra, glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by.
James B. Sep 23, 2007, 4:35pm EDT
Nice job
ONY ME Sep 23, 2007, 5:15pm EDT
Thanks James.
Marie L. Sep 24, 2007, 3:30pm EDT
Very nice!
ONY ME Sep 24, 2007, 4:04pm EDT
Many thanks Marie.
Patty Mayonaise Sep 29, 2007, 11:05pm EDT
great :)
ONY ME Sep 29, 2007, 11:11pm EDT
Thanks Amylee.
Free Spirit or the guy next door ~. Sep 30, 2007, 7:27am EDT
This poem should be read every day, to know how special a soul mate really can be. One should not doubt ones self if you know what I mean. Thanks for this poem it is with me always as is my British Love....
ONY ME Sep 30, 2007, 10:00am EDT
Pleased to hear that Ron. Glad you stopped by.
Free Spirit or the guy next door ~. Oct 1, 2007, 10:47pm EDT
This poems is so special, not so much the words but who wrote it. The flow of the words from start to end bring visions of a warm heart happily given to that chosen one called your soul mate. Again I thank you for sharing with me what is in your heart xxxxxx...
Jean A. Oct 2, 2007, 9:53am EDT
Excerlant!
We are all looking for a soul mate.
ONY ME Oct 2, 2007, 10:19am EDT
Flattery will get you everywhere Ron.....lol
So glad you stopped by.....xxxxx
ONY ME Oct 2, 2007, 10:20am EDT
Thanks Jean....nice of you to stop by.
Enoch Allen Oct 3, 2007, 5:05pm EDT
A little too short!
ONY ME Oct 3, 2007, 5:37pm EDT
Thanks for stopping by Enoch.
Free Spirit or the guy next door ~. Oct 3, 2007, 11:10pm EDT
Is there more to this poem? I sure hope so. Again this is such a lovely poem from a lovely lady...
andrew c. Oct 5, 2007, 10:44am EDT
great poem ony
ONY ME Oct 5, 2007, 10:56am EDT
Thanks for stopping by again Ron....always great to hear from you.
ONY ME Oct 5, 2007, 10:57am EDT
Thanks Andrew....glad you liked it.
Glenda Bixler Oct 10, 2007, 1:24pm EDT
Sweet Ony...
ONY ME Oct 10, 2007, 2:05pm EDT
Thanks Glenda....nice of you to stop by.
Always Tillie M. Oct 10, 2007, 2:08pm EDT
Beautiful, I believe in soul mates and this is how I want mine to be someday.
Hollie ~TNR Works~ Oct 10, 2007, 2:13pm EDT
Very nice poem. I really liked the way it flowed so easily together. :-)
ONY ME Oct 10, 2007, 5:46pm EDT
Many thanks Tillie.....glad you liked it.
ONY ME Oct 10, 2007, 5:47pm EDT
Thanks Hollie for your kind words.
amarpreet k. Oct 23, 2007, 8:10am EDT
good one --
ONY ME Oct 23, 2007, 8:13am EDT
Thanks Amarpreet for stopping by.
Karolyn Q. Oct 30, 2007, 5:11pm EDT
Beautiful.
ONY ME Oct 30, 2007, 5:13pm EDT
Many thanks Karolyn.
Ron (in complete sheeple overload) W. Dec 8, 2007, 1:32pm EST
On a mission, can't talk now, Trying to give fifty points (at least) to all my connections for Christmas, or whatever:

Ten unsolicited points from the world's worst connection. Merry whatever you celebrate!
~*~Nina~*~ R. Jan 30, 2008, 11:36pm EST
Just beautiful! You have such a wonderful way of putting feelings into words!

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