The Story of a Golden Aura Lost in a Grey Fog
As told by a Woodsman
I've just come from the woodland
But I'm almost ready to leave
The eyes of you villagers are without grace
And I feel condemned without reprieve.
You town folk have an angry glare
Why you don't even know my name
Yet your eyes are inflamed and your talons bare
You resent the fact that I came.
Oh I'm not like you with rules and lines
So why sneer at my brushed deer hide?
You dread knowing the reason why I came
Your eyes bore for my darker side.
I've searched all my life for my Indigo bride
I've come today for my woodland sprite
The one you see as dull and grey ash
Yet whose aura shines gold bright.
Oh you angry people
So quick to condemn
All you see in her
Is "just one of them".
She's my dear Kerrin from this street
Who once a week hears my call
Then leaves your musty fog
To be far away from you all.
You'd know about her forest joys
If you could hear her when she sings
But it's when she hears the humming bird
That her love like a fountain springs.
She knows not yet that I've learned
To make those trilling sounds
The enticing call of the jungle bird
That leads her on to sweeter grounds.
None of you have seen her dance
You've never heard her song
For only forest creatures know
To whom her heart belongs.
She dives into a crystal pool
And sundries on a boulder
There she sings her song of love
Of passions that now smoulder.
You think you know
All there is about all
But awakening only comes
When you hear a lover's call.
And now I'm here
At the step of her small home
Her dull grey days are over
I've brought her lover's poem.
Of no importance your dark frowns
Now that my song will be heard
She'll finally know
The secret of her humming bird.
Sweet forest maiden
Answer to my goal
Come dare to show them
The beauty of your soul.


Comments: 25
Blessings and good luck, now and always - S.
I've searched all my life for my Indigo bride
I've come today for my woodland sprite
The one you see as dull and grey ash
Yet whose aura shines gold bright.
loved it all....
this is such a haunting poem... and I like the way the lover defends his love, and the way you've spoken about life in and out of the urban landscape...
lovely read...
Like IT!
This is a beautiful poem of romantic love - rather like something I would think the knights errant used to sing! Thank you!
I remember this one...still find it beautiful and mysteriously haunting.
I'm glad that you liked it. It's meant to take you away to another world...just for a moment. Blessings too.
Beautiful comment Bhawana. It meant something to me.
Yes Cristina...you've got the right idea.
But it's rather meant to be a rugged young man who lives with God's creatures and instinctively recognises the inner beauty of a person who comes to share the world the he loves.
You saw the true essence of the story. Yes it's about how one can be considered as just one of the crowd in a community...yet inside one is an untamed spirit.
I'm fine Gautami
Recovered from all my hospital things. How are you? You liked it? Fantastic.
I really love your take on this poem. The man's anger. Hmmm....I think that he's really holding up a mirror and asking the village people to look at themselves.
He asks them whether they were aware of a Free Spirit living within their midst. He asks them whether they felt warmed by the beauty in her eyes or whether they just thought that she was "a little weird"?
These are people that strive for higher levels.
They have expressive eyes and open gestures. They don't have hidden agendas.
When you spend time with them...a minute or a year or more...you find that horisons, that you never knew of before, open up.
I taught a class of Indogo children once and they taught me, by their behaviour, their creativity and their natural inner love, about the presence among us of Golden People.
Yes Minnie...this is a rewrite...but a total reworking of that had not only errors but incorrect cross references.
The very funny thing was that in spite of its unforgivable set of errors, it was very popular. How do these things work?
This is a style of writing that I indulge in when I'm in a playful mood. I think that it's time that I write one one of my Rumi-Mirabai poems. An area where I feel most at home.
Love. Fred
Ah Anne. Thank you. Your words come as I begin to wonder about this poem. Does it speak to the reader? Delightful sounds good.
It's great to experience your insight as applied to one of my poems.
As I read your comments I saw fresh angles to my thoughts. Yes "our own chosen Eden".
That's precisely what I try to bring into my own life and specifically to this poem.
Your opinions have given me a stimulation that I can with at the moment.