by Nina A
Member since:
June 23, 2007

MAID OF THE SEA

September 18, 2007 12:16 AM EDT
views: 29 | rating: 9.8/10 (10 votes) | comments: 12

So now I swim away.  My green green flipper glittering in the sun.

I hope you remember it.  I hope it makes you smile. 

Maybe one day you will catch me and keep me for awhile.

For now the mermaid must return to the lonely deep sea.

I don't want these fish here, I want the fisherman.

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Comments: 12

James s F. Sep 18, 2007, 2:27am EDT
interesting- the mermaids point of view
Sandi K. Sep 28, 2007, 7:28pm EDT
Yes, very interesting. Never looked at it that way before.
":o)
Ron B. Sep 29, 2007, 12:58am EDT
This is very good and I enjoyed it.
Heidianna "Coriander" T. Sep 29, 2007, 3:59pm EDT
Awww, very sweet, and full of longing... Very nicely done!
denise e Sep 29, 2007, 7:07pm EDT
very interesting:)
Austin Cushing Dec 13, 2007, 1:54am EST
This comment is to let you know that this content has reached at least five votes and over 8.0 average rating, and as such has been removed from Rating Resurrectionists! Congratulations!
Sherry W. Apr 23, 2008, 4:29pm EDT
Interesting piece, thanks.
Sammie B. Apr 25, 2008, 9:05am EDT
Great work.
Jodie P. Apr 25, 2008, 9:21am EDT
Awww good work.
☆ ƒåitĥ ☆ Apr 25, 2008, 11:57am EDT
This is an interesting subject and I especially liked the last line.
Austin Cushing May 3, 2008, 9:09pm EDT
This comment is to let you know that this content has reached ten comments, and as such has been removed from Comment Speedway and the Comment Ignition Comment Stimulus Edition! Contest participants within the first ten comments have been credited! Congratulations!
amy s. Jul 8, 2008, 2:36pm EDT
I gave you a ten because I think that you are a special person.

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