Longing - A Haiku

Comments: 14

Kadee K. Sep 17, 2007, 12:00pm EDT

Ewwww. You're my dad. That's gross!

~*Jackie Ferrari*~ Sep 17, 2007, 12:31pm EDT

lol @ Katie

I like it. Short and hot.
Very nice, Jerry.

Bundy P Sep 17, 2007, 1:21pm EDT

Woo hoo!

♥kyra D. Sep 17, 2007, 3:11pm EDT

Heheheeee... love Katie's reply.

Very HOT Jerry. Nice haiku.

Janine D. Sep 17, 2007, 4:52pm EDT

Yow, smokin'!

Founding Editor Sep 17, 2007, 7:11pm EDT

A senryu is very much like a haiku but without reference to nature.

Check out Lyrical Passion Poetry E-zine.

Jerry Owens Sep 17, 2007, 7:15pm EDT

Sorry Katie-Kate, one of the disadvantages of having your Dad on the same website.

anna vee Sep 17, 2007, 10:50pm EDT

Oh baby...this is very good!

Dena Straughn Sep 21, 2007, 2:13am EDT

Whew. Get a fan!

Founding Editor Sep 23, 2007, 6:02pm EDT

your touch

standing

next to open flames

this is what I get from your poem. A nice senryu.

Nice work!

- Managing Editor

Digital Diva S. Sep 24, 2007, 6:34pm EDT

I like it too.

j - Frugal Mom - r. Sep 26, 2007, 10:50am EDT

Great!!

Lea M. Sep 27, 2007, 11:07am EDT

I'm all FOR creating some steam in very few syllables.

Love Haiku and flash fiction for this very reason.

t b. Oct 22, 2007, 9:53pm EDT

I came back to read this one again.
It's very good you know...