I've read a few of the submissions to the First Chapters Romance contest, and have been surprisingly impressed with what I've seen. I'm sure they're not all as good as the ones I've perused, but who knows?
So, with about two days left to vote in the first round, what am I missing? What chapter have YOU read that's so good that I just HAVE to read it? I can't go through and read every single submission since I like to leave comments more substantative than 'Nice job, 10', but if you know of one that's a true contender, please leave the link for me below and I'll do my darndest to take a peek.


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I've never been able to concentrate for long on computer text though. When I was taking some classes through the local college, I decided to do it all online. I had problems understanding lectures etc on the screen.
Finally one day I decided to print it out. I mean come on, how can I have such trouble reading? I've been reading at a college level since about 8th or 9th grade!
So, I printed a lecture out and BAM there it was. No problem at all. I really don't understand what the difference would be for me but there is a HUGE difference between words on a screen and words on paper. *shrugs*. (I won't even tell you what my monthly cost was for printing out all my college documents!).
So, I've tried to read a few of these first Chapter submissions. I typically can't focus beyond the first or second paragraph though. I have been trying to get to the Chapters from my connections and give them a 10 just to show my support.
"Wife Seeking Wife"
http://www.gather.com/viewArticle.jsp?articleId=281474977080234
http://www.gather.com/viewArticle.jsp?articleId=281474977093325
Hope you enjoy it!
Christine
Somewhere Down the Road
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