Sunrise (Haiku)

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Brenda (square peg in a round hole) H. Sep 16, 2007, 8:09am EDT

Very nice haiku and a beautiful picture too.

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Rima S. Sep 16, 2007, 8:10am EDT

What a lovely sunrise...good morning Audrey..:)

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Linda DeMerle Sep 16, 2007, 8:17am EDT

Incredible image.

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Teresa W. Sep 16, 2007, 8:18am EDT

Beautiful!!

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Spencer T. Sep 16, 2007, 8:41am EDT

Lovely. I thought of a beautiful buttefly opening up.

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greg smith Sep 16, 2007, 8:59am EDT

Audrey, I am not a big Haiku person, but nonetheless saw your article article and thought that I'd say good morning and that I'd visited and chat a little. Actually, I greatly enjoyed your haiku, and will read another soon.

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Larry H. Sep 16, 2007, 9:31am EDT

Beautiful picture and poem thanks for sharing

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flit . Sep 16, 2007, 9:34am EDT

very nice

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Kjersti W. Sep 16, 2007, 9:36am EDT

Great haiku and photo to go with it.

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Peter Joseph Swanson Sep 16, 2007, 10:16am EDT

SUPER!!

well done

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Anne B. Grote Sep 16, 2007, 10:17am EDT

pretty - I like the peach and blue combo!

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Sue * Sep 16, 2007, 10:36am EDT

Wow...you really had a beautiful wake up call didn't you? I woke to unexpected rain, which was also nice...but, not nearly as pretty.

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Denise B. Sep 16, 2007, 11:07am EDT

Great Poem, and great Picture!!

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Steph-in-NE ..... Sep 16, 2007, 12:33pm EDT

both so awesome,, I wish I had some sort of talent,,,,

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Sensational Sadie Sexy Senior Sitizen Sep 16, 2007, 12:39pm EDT

Stephanie, God gave us all a talent. You must seek yours. Perhaps it is in what you do for others.

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Susan Roberts Sep 16, 2007, 1:10pm EDT

BEAUTIFUL colors

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lynn a. Sep 16, 2007, 1:15pm EDT

Beautiful photo of the sunrise. Did you take it?

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Sensational Sadie Sexy Senior Sitizen Sep 16, 2007, 1:26pm EDT

I cannot tell a lie. I borrowed the photo but it looks just the way our sky did this morning.

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jane K. Sep 16, 2007, 1:52pm EDT

gorgeous, words & pic combined

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Sandra T. Sep 16, 2007, 2:02pm EDT

I too was up before the sun, unfortunately I couldn't get out of bed. I think I really did something bad to my back! Wonderful haiku and gorgeous pictures! Hope you have a nice day Audrey!

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Sensational Sadie Sexy Senior Sitizen Sep 16, 2007, 2:10pm EDT

I hope you will go to my article This Is The Day written about my experience this morning.

This is the Day

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Carole D. Sep 16, 2007, 3:34pm EDT

Very nice work, Audrey! The haiku AND that photo! WOW!

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Founding Editor Sep 16, 2007, 4:24pm EDT

good haiku

please visit: http://lyricalpassionpoetry.page.tl

Take care

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LISA S. Sep 16, 2007, 7:35pm EDT

both the haiku and pic are beautiful!!
i wish i was that good!!
keep up the great work!!

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Karen T. Sep 16, 2007, 9:06pm EDT

Sweet and easy poetry!
Audrey, very nice.
Remakable image , also.
Love,
Karen

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julie v. Sep 16, 2007, 10:16pm EDT

Truly beautiful.

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Carol Lloyd Sep 17, 2007, 6:29am EDT

Very nice haiku

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John Harris Beck Sep 17, 2007, 11:59am EDT

I'm also getting up before the sun, wonderful to greet it.
A fine haiku, especially the suspended cloud-quality in the first line,
and gorgeous sunrise to look at.

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