Musing (haiku)

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Barbary Chaapel Sep 13, 2007, 12:08am EDT

Very, Very nice, Manoj.

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manoj sanyal Sep 14, 2007, 12:05am EDT

Thanks Karen.
Thanks Barbary.
Happy to know that you liked.

Best wishes

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John Harris Beck Sep 14, 2007, 7:30am EDT

A fine metaphysical haiku, with a movement like releasing a dove. I like how "muse" does double service, and I love "And poetics sing."

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manoj sanyal Sep 15, 2007, 12:46am EDT

Thanks dear. I am very happy that a poet of class like you has appreciated this amateurish thought.
Thanks again.

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Nathan Schauer Sep 15, 2007, 9:24pm EDT

The concept of 'brushing the muse' is very interesting. There is also a paradoxical direction to 'color the whites' which is mysterious. Pieces I would like to see you explore more.

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manoj sanyal Sep 17, 2007, 8:41am EDT

Dear Nathan,
I wrote this as I thought at that moment with my poetic feelings. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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John F Walter Oct 12, 2007, 5:34pm EDT

Exquisite, manoj. The poem refers to itself, the action of writing a poem, and poetics, the understanding of poetry. Well done.

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manoj sanyal Oct 15, 2007, 2:52am EDT

Thanks John. Thanks again for appreciation.
Best wishes

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Tom C. Nov 17, 2007, 2:13pm EST

Excellent Haiku, Manoj. I felt a rainbow as your brushings entwined with the white of time to sing. A clean, clear description of an immeasurably vivid event.

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manoj sanyal Nov 21, 2007, 1:50am EST

Thanks dear for appreciation.

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Musing (haiku)

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