by Sarah (I want points)
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January 12, 2007

C: Crushed Spirit - Bruised Heart

September 12, 2007 11:05 AM EDT (Updated: September 12, 2007 12:58 PM EDT)
views: 74 | comments: 32

Crushed Spirit - Bruised Heart
Could you be more loving next time?
Crushed Spirit - Bruised Heart
Can I recover?

Crushed Spirit - Bruised Heart
Careless words uttered thoughtlessly
Crushed Spirit - Bruised Heart
Can this nightmare continue?

Crushed Spirit - Bruised Heart
Casual words hurt so much
Crushed Spirit - Bruised Heart
Continues to follow me; haunts me.

Carefree again?
Can it be possible?
Can these words be erased?
 

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Comments: 32

David Smith Sep 12, 2007, 11:12am EDT
Very good Sarah!
Lisa Frost Sep 12, 2007, 12:10pm EDT
Good job, you might want to check your spelling on the first verse, you accidently dropped an S. (I hate it when I drop things like that! It always makes a loud noise when it hits the floor and scares me...LOL)
Denise B. Sep 12, 2007, 12:24pm EDT
quite nice
Good job Sarah~
Lela M. Sep 13, 2007, 8:01am EDT
Good poem.
Robert - just a simple man - B. Sep 13, 2007, 8:04am EDT
Crossing over from 'crushed' to 'carefree'. A healing process.
I like this. Well done.
Anne M. Sep 13, 2007, 8:06am EDT
very nice, I can feel your pain.
Bridget ♥ Sep 13, 2007, 10:11am EDT
Crushed hearts, I have had that happen to me before as well! Of course, I thought it was then end of the world...but it wasn't! Healing does take time but it does happen!

This is a great poem, nicely done!
Otelia S. Sep 13, 2007, 11:22am EDT
Coming up with these articles
Counting on the alphabets
Can be very
Complicated but you are
Conquering it
Completely in a very
Cool way.
Can I offer you a 10 !!!!
Jay M. Sep 13, 2007, 11:29am EDT
10
Jennifer Oliver Sep 13, 2007, 12:50pm EDT
Cool ten-star poem!
Hollie ~TNR Works~ Sep 13, 2007, 1:17pm EDT
Class act! Nice work.
Sarah C. Sep 13, 2007, 1:24pm EDT
Clever! :) Great poem...
amy s. Sep 13, 2007, 1:36pm EDT
very poetic. I hope your heart gets mended.
Charlotte Babb Maven-Fairy Godmother Sep 13, 2007, 2:17pm EDT
Well done.
Lisa (I love loons) C. Sep 13, 2007, 3:16pm EDT
Very well done! Cool poem
cindy beck Sep 13, 2007, 6:12pm EDT
clearly conjugating cool comments...this is fun!
Pat M. Sep 13, 2007, 6:54pm EDT
Cleverly done, if a bit sad. But that's good too...
Sarah, I had done A but I guess I missed b. will go back to do it as well.
Clear-clean-coolest-catagore yet.
love the poem.
Congratulations
God Blessings
dee-dee
10*
Connie H. Sep 13, 2007, 7:55pm EDT
Sarah:

Your on your way, and off with a great headstart. You have what it takes to write. Keep working and you'll get where you want to be. Excellent job! Thanks so much for sharing.
Jamie S. Sep 13, 2007, 10:00pm EDT
great writing! big 10!
Syed The Shah Sep 13, 2007, 10:24pm EDT
Congrats for the alphabet article success.

Cool Down, next is D to get you down.

Cut short none, still there are 23 letters to swarm.

Crack Da Vinci codes with your mind.

Cats, dogs and rats all invited to shine.

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Timothy S. Sep 14, 2007, 2:52pm EDT
very touching!
Cool poem
Syed The Shah Sep 14, 2007, 9:57pm EDT
Clever
cracked
crashed
cdute.
Kelly M. Sep 17, 2007, 5:01pm EDT
Nicely done!
Barb M Sep 18, 2007, 3:30pm EDT
Casual words hurt so much ... that line caught my attention and I can't let it go.
Good job
Dave J. Sep 18, 2007, 8:15pm EDT
Casual words carefully carve out a crushed heart.... Profound the impact of words on the spirit. Good poem..
Patti M. Oct 6, 2007, 2:07pm EDT
Crushed hearts can come from those callous words thrown in ones direction. By the way I've read Z so now I'm playing catch up. Congrats again on finishing.
Erica Hidvegi Jun 29, 2008, 4:31pm EDT
Have you been reading my mind ? Since my latest disagreement with mate, we are not speaking . . . bruised soul and crushed spirit I can definitely relate to. Excellent work !Image Hosting by PictureTrail.comLove is 'Good Luck Eternal'

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