Listen to me (writing image challenge)

Listen to me
I bring you joy

Listen to me
I bring you love

Listen to me
I bring you hope

Listen to me

I bring you wonder

Listen to me

Listen

Please

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Janet "Jax" B. Sep 12, 2007, 7:16am UTC

nice....wish I could get the kids to listen...

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Janine D. Sep 12, 2007, 7:38am UTC

I know the feeling- so much to offer, falling on deaf ears

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Brenda (square peg in a round hole) H. Sep 12, 2007, 7:49am UTC

Very nice Charlotte.

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Cori Anders Sep 12, 2007, 7:56am UTC

This is very sweet! And urgent!

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Charlotte Babb Maven-Fairy Godmother Sep 12, 2007, 2:17pm UTC

Thank you all so much for your comments. I hope the mom in question will hear that sweet child in time for him or her to keep that sweet look.

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Virginia M. Sep 12, 2007, 5:42pm UTC

The incessant cry of a child, " Listen, to me!"
You captured it well!

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Trish A. Sep 12, 2007, 6:45pm UTC

Absolutely marvelous! This poem belongs in front of the eyes of parents! Bless you for writing and sharing this.

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Donna Hammett-Tooker Sep 12, 2007, 8:42pm UTC

We write because no one listened to us - and if we are lucky they pay for it later on with their hard-earned dollars.

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Shaunee C. Sep 12, 2007, 10:45pm UTC

Sweet picture

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Charlotte Babb Maven-Fairy Godmother Sep 13, 2007, 11:13pm UTC

I know lots fo peple who were and who are not listened to, who have much to say, who could bring joy to the ones who ignore them...like this baby. I did not take the picture, it comes from the Writing Image challenge for this week.

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Listen to me (writing image challenge)

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