by Nina A

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June 23, 2007

hollow

September 06, 2007 08:19 AM EDT

views: 22 | rating: 10/10 (11 votes) | comments: 13

How many times must I cry over you?

How many times I've died for you.

I can't lead but I can't follow.

All that's left is something hollow.

Tags: gather, fear, saddness, heart, missing parts, spirit, hate, love, poetry, people, confusion, writing

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Comments: 13

David Smith Sep 6, 2007, 8:21am EDT

I'm leaving you a drive-by 10 because it gives you points and it gives me points too. If you don't like DB10's don't worry about it, it's just an extra Gather point for you and me.

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Charity M. Sep 6, 2007, 8:51am EDT

((( How true...what you have written...)))

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Haim Kadman Sep 6, 2007, 11:35am EDT

It's really nice Anita, but why rush and cut it that short?

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Jamie ~grant me the serenity..~ G. Sep 6, 2007, 2:52pm EDT

Very well done.

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Demongirl A.K.A. Girl Toy Sep 7, 2007, 1:56am EDT

Very nice short poem! I liked it!

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Christopher K. Sep 7, 2007, 3:36pm EDT

this is pretty good,but also sounds like a soul has given up

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james r. Sep 8, 2007, 9:46pm EDT

ive felt that way, but couldnt stop rambling :(

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Brenda (square peg in a round hole) H. Sep 10, 2007, 12:21am EDT

Sad but nice.

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Angela <:3---}~~~~ M. Sep 10, 2007, 12:55am EDT

i love it

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Marie L. Dec 4, 2007, 10:16am EST

Very nice!

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Austin Cushing Dec 4, 2007, 4:19pm EST

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Sarah McSib Dec 5, 2007, 12:16am EST

Very nice!

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Shelbia C. Sep 1, 2008, 7:04pm EDT

great

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