by Susan B.
Member since:
February 13, 2007

Autumn Breezes (A to Z)

September 04, 2007 12:34 PM EDT
views: 53 | rating: 10/10 (17 votes) | comments: 22
 

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Autumn Breezes (A to Z)

Autumn breezes change
direction even flirting
gliding heavenward impishly
jittery kites leap maniacally
newspapers open parachuting quickly
refuse scampers toward us vexingly
while Xeroxed yardwaste zigzags

2007 © Sue Barton

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Comments: 22

Kathy D. Sep 4, 2007, 12:35pm EDT
I like this a lot!
~*Jackie Ferrari*~ Sep 4, 2007, 12:46pm EDT
I have never seen any poems like this, Susan!
Very nice!
:-)
this was a very cool poem Susan, thanks!!!
Vinay Benjamin Sep 4, 2007, 12:49pm EDT
Susan - that was sheer genius using every letter of the alphabet - comendable.
Arlene H. Sep 4, 2007, 12:55pm EDT
cool. now try teaching the alphabet to preschoolers using these words...
Patricia I. Sep 4, 2007, 1:09pm EDT
Very very nice, thanks for sharing
dianne j. Sep 4, 2007, 1:17pm EDT
How very clever ! I love it!
Janet O. Sep 4, 2007, 1:27pm EDT
Nicely written...impressive!
Sheila Deeth Sep 4, 2007, 2:53pm EDT
Planning to follow your link and read more when I have more time.
Nancy S. Sep 4, 2007, 4:39pm EDT
I liked it a lot. Interesting useage.
Dena Straughn Sep 4, 2007, 5:08pm EDT
very real


Dancing With My Dream"
Angela P. Sep 4, 2007, 6:24pm EDT
Nice.
Denise B. Sep 4, 2007, 6:52pm EDT
just "blown" away, i loved it
Granny Janny H. Sep 4, 2007, 7:53pm EDT
Here is my comment paired with Sue's poem in the same format of A to Z.
Click on my name to find the article as a collaboration...

Awesome!
Because clever development
emphasizes Fall's glory;
how in jumpy kinesis
lines make new observations.
promoting quick rhythms
shaping the unbridled variable wind ~
(e)xillerating
yearly
zephyrs!
Angie O. Sep 4, 2007, 8:10pm EDT
Very Good Susan, unique style
Kimberly Ripley Sep 4, 2007, 8:56pm EDT
This "blows" my mind! (I like it.)
arlene (no shame in my game) w. Sep 5, 2007, 10:07am EDT
That was impressive!
jmarie s. Oct 8, 2007, 11:04pm EDT
Awesome. Thanks again. another 10
Bonnie C. Oct 11, 2007, 11:57am EDT
Good job!

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