by Zoe H.

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February 22, 2007

Good Friends

September 03, 2007 11:43 AM EDT (Updated: September 03, 2007 10:16 PM EDT)

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Good Friends

Fluctuating like weather,

Is the emotion

So unstable.

A while ago,

"Showering”

A while later,

Laughing.

Others

Handing tissues

Drying the wet face.

Telling jokes

Bringing laughter.

It's a day

With "showers" and "shines"

But with friends' care

Sweet and dear.

Tags: emotion, good friends, fluctuating, feeling

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Comments: 9

Samantha H. Sep 3, 2007, 12:19pm EDT

Awww, sweet! Very nice.

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Cindy F. Sep 3, 2007, 1:52pm EDT

Love it!

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Sammie B. Sep 3, 2007, 5:37pm EDT

Very nice. you describe the epic rollar coaster that is friendship perfectly!

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Lela M. Sep 3, 2007, 8:24pm EDT

That is a sweet tribute to friends that truly care.

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Zoe H. Sep 3, 2007, 8:53pm EDT

Thank you.

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Doc, in the middle, holding on... Curmudgeon esq. Sep 4, 2007, 12:45am EDT

stability is vastly overrated..

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andrew c. Sep 4, 2007, 2:25am EDT

cool poem

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Denise B. Sep 4, 2007, 8:34am EDT

very nice poem

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Julie K. Aug 16, 2008, 5:44pm EDT

You can see the friends clearly!
That's nice!

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