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Comments: 16

Carol Lloyd Aug 26, 2007, 6:17pm UTC

very nice ty

Alison H. Aug 26, 2007, 6:45pm UTC

That's a 10. Just beautiful.

Alison H. Aug 26, 2007, 8:01pm UTC

Sometimes the smallest poems pack the biggest punch.

See Robert Bly's collection of small poems (from different poets).

Alison H. Aug 26, 2007, 8:08pm UTC

Post the poem to some of the poetry sites on Gather. There are many!

La Bellota Aug 27, 2007, 9:12am UTC

oh...I want to but I am afraid. I am just trying. I am soooo not a "poet" in all the poet-y sense of the word. BUT thank you so much for liking it.

Michele Scercy Aug 27, 2007, 11:47am UTC

This is just delicious.

Syed The Shah Aug 27, 2007, 2:31pm UTC

Beautiful and sweet.
Very hot the final verse.
Gracias.

Shah

Osofo Addo Aug 27, 2007, 3:34pm UTC

Interesting and nice poem . Thank you for sharing

Yasher the Cute Canadian Aug 27, 2007, 4:31pm UTC

La Bellota Aug 27, 2007, 4:54pm UTC

why Bradley, that is exactly what I meant......*assumes angel posture complete with flickering fluroscent light halo* ;)

Lavonne www.bildurdreams.com Aug 27, 2007, 4:57pm UTC

That was great. You're more of a poet than you think.

La Bellota Aug 28, 2007, 8:34am UTC

I KNEW IT! hee.

Randee "The Court Jester of LaLa Land ! ! !" always and forever, I just want to celebrate Aug 30, 2007, 11:49am UTC

very cool poem La Bellota, thanks!!!