by Bijou *~MotherGrizzly~* M.
Member since:
October 2, 2006

"Leather"--acrostic poem

August 20, 2007 04:04 PM EDT
views: 51 | rating: 10/10 (15 votes) | comments: 17
Love, with you, has never been
Expected. A faceted jewel nestled in a secret box,
A star that streaks across the evening sky, your eyes
Transforming from cocoa to caramel when the sun
Hits the irises. Love watercolors our world and allows the light
Entrance into hidden niches. Our Eden before the Fall,
Resilient and eternal.


...it's my three-year wedding anniversary, and the theme is "leather." Hence the title :) Husband, this is for you. xxx

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Comments: 17

Carolyn K. Aug 20, 2007, 4:11pm EDT
Awwwwwww....I think I may be a tad bit jealous...*I* shoulda married you!!!
LOL
Lacey K. Aug 20, 2007, 4:30pm EDT
This is great! Very well done! Happy Anniversary!
Bijou *~MotherGrizzly~* M. Aug 20, 2007, 4:41pm EDT
Thanks Lacey! Carolyn, you and I are married in spirit :)
Charles M. Aug 20, 2007, 6:57pm EDT
Three years! It doesn't even feel like it. Pretty soon it will be ten years after we blink. This is the best anniversary present yet. Love you lots!!
Bijou *~MotherGrizzly~* M. Aug 21, 2007, 1:46pm EDT
Thanks a bunch Bradley--your comment means a lot because you are a true artist.
Marie J. R. Aug 21, 2007, 4:21pm EDT
well done,,, respected Love is for always,,,
amarpreet k. Aug 22, 2007, 11:39am EDT
wonderful ...
congrates to both of you
Kelly M. Aug 22, 2007, 12:02pm EDT
Great work!
Sheri Fresonke H. Aug 24, 2007, 1:44am EDT
He sounds wonderful. I love the title, really caught my interest. :-) Sheri
Sammie B. Aug 27, 2007, 10:17pm EDT
Heh, the title was a little misleading. I thought it was really about leather. xD Shows how simple I am.

This is a very sweet poem, though! The wording is wonderful, and the emotion is so deep! Hopefully there will be many more objects for you to write about like this. ;)
violentine n. Aug 28, 2007, 4:30pm EDT
happy belated anniversary!
Susan B. Aug 29, 2007, 1:07pm EDT
Superb!
Terry Collett Sep 3, 2007, 2:50am EDT
This is superb and how comes I never got around to reading your poetry before?
Granny Janny H. Sep 12, 2007, 12:45am EDT
Leather love leaves me longing for more romantic poetry!
☆ ƒåitĥ ☆ Jun 4, 2008, 12:36pm EDT
GREAT job here.
Erica Hidvegi Jul 17, 2008, 1:14am EDT
I wrote one of these also . . .
my acrostic poetry
feedback is appreciated

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