by Sue D.
Member since:
December 16, 2006

clouds

August 20, 2007 04:14 AM EDT
views: 33 | comments: 16

 

the clouds

write a story

moving

with the wind

changing form

without effort

adapting to

unseen forces

absorbing

then releasing

sometimes violently

thrashing with electricity

sometimes gently

soft tears

sometimes quietly

the sun shines

they move along

acclimated

accepting

just clouds

 

 

 

 

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Comments: 16

Corina Carrasco Aug 20, 2007, 4:22am EDT
Very nice, Sue. Wouldn't it be nice to be a cloud, sometimes?
Sue D. Aug 20, 2007, 4:23am EDT
I think there is something to be learned from them, Corina.
love it
queen.susan . Aug 20, 2007, 5:22am EDT
Oh....
I really like how you use words!!
great writing.
wonderful to read.
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Apryl Just Apryl Aug 20, 2007, 7:57am EDT
Love it, I like the movement!
Denise B. Aug 20, 2007, 8:14am EDT
quite fanciful, I love it.
amarpreet k. Aug 20, 2007, 10:08am EDT
lovely Sue ..clouds always fascinate me ...they always seem to tell me a story ..
© MrBill   Aug 20, 2007, 2:06pm EDT
Very nice Sue.

... how 'bout those clouds of wintertime and the
white fairydust they sprinkle over the mountains ...
Carole D. Aug 20, 2007, 2:20pm EDT
This flows so smoothly... just like the clouds! Love it!
Alison H. Aug 20, 2007, 6:03pm EDT
Lovely. So nice to just sit back sometimes and watch the clouds!
Tom d. Aug 20, 2007, 6:52pm EDT
I also love clouds. This is a nice poem - gentle and smooth and if Apryl L loves it then it must be good!

You commented on my "Last Night (a fantasy)" about Karen T and I? I have asked you a question there recently - maybe if you have time you can stop by and see what has transpired there since you saw it last and answer my question. Please?
Sheila Deeth Aug 20, 2007, 8:36pm EDT
I like clouds too.
JoAnne D. Aug 20, 2007, 9:13pm EDT
Nice a great share.
Shelly W. Aug 25, 2007, 8:00am EDT
love your descriptive words, and your style of writing, free flowing like mine, nice poetry.
necee t. Jun 1, 2008, 12:27pm EDT
very lovely poem... clouds are universal... we all get to see them almost every day... sometimes they are dark clouds, but then the sun comes out and things are all right again... Bless you...
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