by Nina A
Member since:
June 23, 2007

Forgive with Freedom

August 16, 2007 04:19 PM EDT
views: 21 | rating: 10/10 (9 votes) | comments: 11

Today is my destiny.  Am I not of sound mind and able body to be here?

To your innocent hate, I forgive you.  Do you consider and still hate?  I still forgive you.

Shall you lend me your heart I would give you my smile.

Have I a crime to be hated for, then forgive me.  I will give you my tears and my blood.

Tomorrow be destined only shall my eyes be opened again.

TODAY I am here

with freedom.

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Comments: 11

Ali L. Aug 16, 2007, 4:46pm EDT
This is really pretty and I give you a ten.
p.s. I'm not usually that mean.
and were you not here with freedom should you have been hated anyway?
Rhoda S. Aug 17, 2007, 4:35am EDT
If you are supposed to love your enemy, how much more should we care for those who are not our enemies?
Nina A Aug 17, 2007, 9:02am EDT
free of anger and hate. a spiritual freedom. your comments make a fine example of true cynicism and selfishness. that truly saddens me.
Nina A Aug 17, 2007, 9:03am EDT
except for ali :)
Charity M. Aug 17, 2007, 12:18pm EDT
(((A loving heart~`~is a free flowing mind~`~allowing us to care for all things...a gazillion 10's)))
Nina A Aug 21, 2007, 1:21am EDT
thank you charity, i am very glad that you understood my message *heart*
Sherry W. Apr 22, 2008, 9:55pm EDT
10! Great!
☆ ƒåitĥ ☆ Apr 24, 2008, 3:03am EDT
I enjoyed reading this. Thanks.
Sammie B. Apr 24, 2008, 11:16am EDT
Beautiful!
Austin Cushing May 3, 2008, 6:40pm EDT
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