by Nina A
Member since:
June 23, 2007

So I Fall

August 15, 2007 04:34 PM EDT
views: 28 | rating: 10/10 (8 votes) | comments: 12

I'd climb down the ladder but the rungs are broken.

So instead I fall.

I am blinded by the darkness around me.

I have no idea where I am.

I have no idea where I am going.

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Comments: 12

Edward Nudelman Aug 15, 2007, 5:52pm EDT
I like this compact poem, with a little wordplay and a lot of spunk. Well done.
Old Crow (straight, but not narrow) Aug 15, 2007, 5:55pm EDT
Love the intensity of feeling.
Charity M. Aug 17, 2007, 12:21pm EDT
(((Nice...hopefully:)...you can get another ladder)))
James s F. Aug 22, 2007, 6:19pm EDT
not a leap of faith, more of a stumble?
La Bellota Sep 25, 2007, 1:20am EDT
Sing it, sister.
Sherry W. Apr 22, 2008, 9:49pm EDT
Very intense.
☆ ƒåitĥ ☆ Apr 23, 2008, 3:06am EDT
Uh oh... sounds like some stumbling is going on here.
Jodie P. Apr 24, 2008, 6:35am EDT
deep, nice , cool, I like it.
Sammie B. Apr 24, 2008, 11:13am EDT
Beautiful poem.
Roxanne N. Apr 24, 2008, 12:31pm EDT
Thanks
Austin Cushing May 3, 2008, 6:29pm EDT
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Shelbia C. Sep 1, 2008, 7:03pm EDT
Good one

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