This hamlet tucked in Himalayan foothills
Has been captured on miles of celluloid
Themed in many picture postcards
Patronized by tourist tribes.
Spreading to the horizon during summer
Natures’ notoriety is seen
Finery and richness of plant kingdom
For centuries an opulence pristine.
Houses with roofs' of clay shingles
Lie helter-skelter yet neighbourly
Betimes where goats resignedly drag
Cheeky tots glued to swollen teats.
A rushing river winds its course
Through this haven to an estuary
Confluence at that distant nadir
Merges raciness with serenity.
Winter brings freezing rigor mortis
Movement lies moribund in sheeted ice
Thawing spring resurrects the serpent
Stillness meanders liberated to glide.
Spiralling leaves from trees on the banks
Caught helpless by the swift current
Are plunged in merry-go-round eddies
Riding giddily on funnelling circles.
Fish break the surface in silvery arcs
Seeking gourmet delights
Dragonflies dodging obscene mouths
Hyperventilate on sheltering reeds.
Strolling through ranks of droopy poppies
Intoxicated with heady jasmine
Contemplate on life I’ve lived here
Age liberated could be forever.
Eternity where souls must gather
If over occupied by the time I arrive
Foregoing august company I’d hasten back
To this unsullied corner of paradise.




Comments: 21
Your words make me long for more beauty in my life. Your words ignite a longing for a simplier life for natural beauty, clean air. The intoxicating scent of Jasmine, the feel of earth beneath ones feet. Your world sounds lovely and more than that, Scared.
My friend I am in awe of your pen.
Jackie - I'd love to go back there again. Tell me when you're ready and I'll tag along. Thank you, dear friend for ALWAYS being full of praise and encouragement.
JoAnne - you're right dear friend. I did go somewhere deep in memory and with eyes closed saw every single visual I'v written about here. That was a part of life, I always miss.
Carole dear friend,if I could - I would be more than pleased to send you the jasmine from that beautiful valley. Thank you.
Apryl - I've often wondered whether paradise could be any better if one finds so much peace and contentment right here in this world in some niches where life is simple. Thank you, my precious friend for your wonderful comments.
Ed - thank you for this honor. I am ever so grateful that you have always been supportive and have never ceased to help me improve my style of writing with your patient advice and suggestions. I truly value such direction and count you among my mentors here on Gather. I see how eliminating "this" from the beginning would appear but I was reminescing a specific place where I lived long ago and that word helped me associate with just that place in vivid detail as I remember.
Deepest regards,
Vinay
Ambar thank you. Your first name while writing would be as fascinating.