by Juan J Martinez
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November 9, 2006

Me haces falta

August 14, 2007 02:14 PM EDT (Updated: August 14, 2007 03:51 PM EDT)
views: 259 | rating: 7.2/10 (6 votes) | comments: 9

Me haces falta

Siento la noche fria

Tu calor solamente un sueno

Tu amor solamente una memoria

 

(This is the start of a new song I am working on. I started it sometime back when

Elena and myself were on a break. It is in Spanish simply because the feelings are more easily translated and expressed in the beautiful language.)

 

Loose Translation :            I miss you I need you

                                          My nights are cold

                                   Your warmth is just a dream

                                      Your love only a memory

 

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Comments: 9

Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Aug 14, 2007, 3:12pm EDT
Good you are working on this ..I don't know spanish .so whenever you publish plz translate it for me,
Janet H. Aug 14, 2007, 8:31pm EDT
¡Qué hermosa!
Monique W. Aug 14, 2007, 11:22pm EDT
Senor... las palabras de la cancion son muy hermosa. Me gusta.

Lets hope there are no typos and the tense is right.
I agree with you about spanish being a beautiful language and a language of love.
Beth G. Aug 15, 2007, 5:56pm EDT
That is lovely, I hope to see the rest of this when you are finished!
brad p. Aug 16, 2007, 7:14am EDT
I think you are good at poetry. you will over come the language barrier. nice work
Juan J Martinez Aug 16, 2007, 8:08am EDT
brad, what language barrier? I write and speak in two soon to be three languages. I am not limited by adhering to only one language.
Ann Weaver Hart Aug 21, 2007, 2:45pm EDT
I prefer the Spanish to the translation, but both are lovely.
Lyssy D. Sep 14, 2007, 12:52am EDT
Mi ME gUStA MUCHO!
MUy BONitA.

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