by Sue D.
Member since:
December 16, 2006

connected

August 13, 2007 09:56 PM EDT
views: 37 | comments: 20

 

I know

the center of you

Your glow

your warmth

the knowledge.

 

I see

who you really are

your love

your pain

the path you are on.

 

I feel

all of you.

your spirit

your hope

the light.

 

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Comments: 20

Frank Reilly Aug 13, 2007, 10:01pm EDT
very good. thanks for sharing
Whoever you wrote this for/about, is a very lucky person. Wonderful!

Ten!
Marilyn
Apryl Just Apryl Aug 13, 2007, 10:14pm EDT
Oh, what wonderful words. This person is indeed fortunate for such insight into another is rare and something we all long for. To be understood.
*LORA* M. Aug 13, 2007, 10:36pm EDT
10
Cheryl W. Aug 13, 2007, 10:40pm EDT
Very beautiful, Sue
Jimmy _ Aug 13, 2007, 11:41pm EDT
This is very nice, Sue!
Corina Carrasco Aug 14, 2007, 1:51am EDT
Wonderful. I imagine it could be for your son. I know you've had a rough road with him and this would be so fitting and so loving of you to write to/for him.
Sue D. Aug 14, 2007, 2:50am EDT
I feel all of that for him Corina. He is full of light now. It is amazing.
Anjan Ray Aug 14, 2007, 8:52am EDT
Simple, effective, heartfelt and oh-so-incredibly-elegant
Bijou *~MotherGrizzly~* M. Aug 14, 2007, 4:36pm EDT
Love the positivity that lingers in this poem
© MrBill   Aug 14, 2007, 9:06pm EDT
mother's love - simple and complete
Lilith Dorsey Aug 14, 2007, 10:49pm EDT
Simple, touching and right to the point. 10 from me.
Sheila Deeth Aug 14, 2007, 10:50pm EDT
Beautiful knowledge.
Sue D. Aug 14, 2007, 11:05pm EDT
Thank you for stopping by Lilith. Thank you all.
that is truly beautiful!
I hope there are people in my life who can see me like that.
Kylee S. Aug 25, 2007, 12:09am EDT
Very beautiful, thanks for sharing.

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