Morning's Heat (Haiku)

Comments: 31

Beverly P. Aug 13, 2007, 11:36am EDT

lovely

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Alison H. Aug 13, 2007, 11:37am EDT

Nice haiku.....

(but humid and searing are two different things)

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Larry H. Aug 13, 2007, 11:40am EDT

thanks for sharing..

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Mary Beth Magee Aug 13, 2007, 11:41am EDT

See, I told you the muse would be back! You go, girl!

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Kjersti W. Aug 13, 2007, 11:47am EDT

Good haiku. You have a typo in line one, though. You are missing the 'n' in mornings.

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Cheryl W. Aug 13, 2007, 11:54am EDT

Boy, can I relate, Audrey. It was 104 here last week. YUCK.

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*LORA* M. Aug 13, 2007, 11:58am EDT

cool

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Sue * Aug 13, 2007, 12:44pm EDT

Your words are perfect for here as well. I looked so forward to summer, and I've spent way too much of it inside this year. Maybe we will have a wonderful fall.

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JoAnne D. Aug 13, 2007, 12:48pm EDT

Unfortunately i think the heat is as bad as the frigid cold.
So I stay indoors a lot aSs well when it is too hot.

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Amy S. Aug 13, 2007, 12:50pm EDT

very nice

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Sensational Sadie Sexy Senior Sitizen Aug 13, 2007, 1:11pm EDT

Kjersti, I fixed it. Thank you for your sharp eye.

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Sensational Sadie Sexy Senior Sitizen Aug 13, 2007, 1:26pm EDT

I wouldn't rush Cindy. Hold off a day or so and it will probably be back to triple digits.

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Grems Aka Sarcastic Warrior Ninja 'gremlin' Aug 13, 2007, 1:47pm EDT

we are supposed to be in the upper 60's during the night... no takin the chance of turning off the air yet.

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Adele G. Aug 13, 2007, 2:37pm EDT

Audrey, I can relate it was 107 yesterday in Russellville, we set a record and Rigo has refused to spin until he can figure how to bring the heat down.

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Marie L. Aug 13, 2007, 3:28pm EDT

How very true! I'm so hot and it's only getting hotter hit seems -- bah! Lovely poem though :-)

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Jerri H. Aug 13, 2007, 4:50pm EDT

Thanks!!! I really don't need to be reminded LOL!!

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Heather W. Aug 13, 2007, 5:34pm EDT

nice haiku! I haven' tried to write one of these before

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Syed The Shah Aug 13, 2007, 6:35pm EDT

The sun is uprising
day is like gleaming inferno --
staying home is good

Good Luck

*(SHAH)*

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Dan (Cowboy Up) V. Aug 13, 2007, 6:47pm EDT

I feel your pain Audrey! lol C):-)

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donna h. Aug 13, 2007, 8:23pm EDT

it has been warm lately

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K D. Aug 13, 2007, 10:22pm EDT

Good one, Audrey! I like the escape of it all!

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Bundy P Aug 13, 2007, 10:25pm EDT

Lovely

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Teresa W. Aug 14, 2007, 3:17am EDT

That is one haiku that really sums up the summer heat! And searing is definitely the right word for it! It's awful! I love the person who invented air conditioning!

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Cristina S. Aug 14, 2007, 12:58pm EDT

Hi Audrey, I love haiku! And this one is really good!

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Peter, who hasn't changed icons. That's Jason G. Aug 14, 2007, 2:19pm EDT

Delightful haiku. thanks for publishing it. Must say, though, thet The Big Apple has had very cool nights this past week, cool enough to require a light blanket. Days are still hot and muggy, though.

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