by Nina A
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August 01, 2007 01:24 AM EDT
views: 26 | rating: 10/10 (8 votes) | comments: 12

You are my eyes that see things for more than just shape and color.  I see deeper than what's in front of me

You are my ears that hear more than just words.  I hear deeper than what is told to me.

You are my heart that beats for everything around me.  You are my heart that makes everything a part of me.  You are my heart that knows without being taught.  I feel more than words can begin to explain

Thank you for coming home.

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Comments: 12

Christopher K. Aug 1, 2007, 2:12am EDT
nicely written : )
Rachael M. Aug 1, 2007, 2:16am EDT
I love this poem!
Haim Kadman Aug 9, 2007, 11:07am EDT
Nice but too short and drop that thank you for coming - make him thank you...
Nina A Dec 11, 2007, 6:12pm EST
IT'S ABOUT MY SPIRIT THANK YOU VERY MUCH
Sherry W. Apr 23, 2008, 3:30pm EDT
Very nice one....
☆ ƒåitĥ ☆ Apr 23, 2008, 3:57pm EDT
Wow, this is a very nice one.
Steve V. Apr 23, 2008, 4:16pm EDT
Nice one
Amy P. Apr 23, 2008, 5:43pm EDT
Very nice.
April H. Apr 24, 2008, 1:30am EDT
Very touching
Jodie P. Apr 24, 2008, 1:51am EDT
well written and very touching to read.
Austin Cushing Apr 24, 2008, 6:39pm EDT
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Shelbia C. Sep 1, 2008, 7:27pm EDT
Well written

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