Strawberry Morning

The sun shines brightly upon your eyes as you watch me sleep. I wake to your lips upon my face. Might this morning be sweeter than the ripest strawberry. You kneel by my side as I drift back in. Holding me, holding the silence as your gaze upon my slumbered face. Again your lips meet mine. Bittersweet sparks as I hate to see you leave. The last of your nectar upon my lips as your fingertips slide away from mine. I shall dream of you until your spirit returns to me.

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Charity M. Jul 26, 2007, 3:36pm EDT

(((BBBBBBEEEEAUTIFUL)))

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Haim Kadman Jul 27, 2007, 1:48am EDT

By God, it's so exquisitely sweet, like the best dream I ever had.

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☆ ƒåitĥ ☆ Apr 23, 2008, 3:18am EDT

This is amazing work.

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Sherry W. Apr 23, 2008, 3:33pm EDT

Just delicious.

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Tory H. Apr 23, 2008, 4:33pm EDT

A wonderful way to awaken...

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Steve V. Apr 23, 2008, 5:13pm EDT

Nice

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Amy P. Apr 23, 2008, 5:23pm EDT

This is so beautiful!

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April H. Apr 24, 2008, 1:36am EDT

Love it

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Jodie P. Apr 24, 2008, 1:44am EDT

Me too. I am with April on this one.

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Sammie B. Apr 24, 2008, 10:09am EDT

Beautiful write!

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Gil T. Wilson Apr 24, 2008, 10:16am EDT

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Strawberry Morning

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