by Nina A
Member since:
June 23, 2007

Cascade

July 26, 2007 12:05 AM EDT (Updated: July 26, 2007 03:59 PM EDT)
views: 21 | rating: 10/10 (7 votes) | comments: 11

Reaching towards the sky to feel the sun,

the warmth invades my every pore.

Cast your light upon me as the water shall be my calm.

Small eyes gaze upon my foreign entrence;

careful to nibble at my toes in the moss.

Be it as my serenity.

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Comments: 11

Seshu BSR C. Jul 26, 2007, 7:12am EDT
10 in the scale.
Nina A Jul 26, 2007, 2:06pm EDT
thank you both
Just lovely! I could almost feel that warmth of the sun reading that.
Moh H. Jan 15, 2008, 9:23pm EST
Made me feel like a warm summer day on a very secluded beach somewhere
April H. Jan 15, 2008, 9:46pm EST
Very nice!
Amy P. Jan 15, 2008, 11:50pm EST
I love it
Selene N. Jan 16, 2008, 3:14am EST
This is a beautiful poem.
Michele Scercy Jan 18, 2008, 9:15pm EST
Very nice
Trish A. Jan 18, 2008, 9:34pm EST
This poem gets better with each read. Excellent.
time lord drax Jan 18, 2008, 9:45pm EST
Not sure what I think about that.
Austin Cushing Jan 18, 2008, 11:38pm EST
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