by Sandra T.
Member since:
March 15, 2007

cry in the rain - haiku

July 25, 2007 08:01 PM EDT
views: 38 | comments: 11

 

 

 

tears run down my cheek

 

i wish it would rain on me

 

to hide my sadness

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Comments: 11

*LORA* M. Jul 25, 2007, 8:13pm EDT
neat
Jae F. Jul 25, 2007, 9:43pm EDT
I like it!
Seshu BSR C. Jul 26, 2007, 7:11am EDT
Excellent
Sandra T. Jul 26, 2007, 6:15pm EDT
Thanks Lora, Jae and Seshu, I was inspired!
AiLing K. Jul 26, 2007, 8:27pm EDT
very nice
great haiku.
Peter Joseph Swanson Aug 6, 2007, 11:49am EDT
perfect
Angi R. Aug 6, 2007, 11:52am EDT
Wow! so much emotion in so few words. I'm impressed...
PURUSHOTHAMA RAO R. Aug 7, 2007, 8:38pm EDT
RAIN showers best love
in forms of sprinkles on dot
thus clouds cry aloud!
like the emotions this piece evokes
Curt L. Jan 21, 2008, 7:30pm EST
Tender! 10!

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