by Elsie Duggan
Member since:
November 8, 2006

Careful Chiding Children (C Alliteration)

July 21, 2007 06:18 PM EDT (Updated: July 21, 2007 06:19 PM EDT)
views: 67 | rating: 10/10 (25 votes) | comments: 32
 

Chiding children causes confusion, crying, cowering carefully ceasing

coveted connections, creating comparisons and concessions, committing

crazy conditions called clever but can carry convictions chilled, cold,

and chipped, ceasing communications to the community causing cowardly

comic creations crowing and clowning,celebrated and clapped at, child

caring commenced, calmed by caressing.

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Comments: 32

jane K. Jul 21, 2007, 6:23pm EDT
cool crazy considered
Alison Pearce Jul 21, 2007, 6:46pm EDT
Well done Elsie!
Nana to Seven Cutiepies Jul 21, 2007, 6:48pm EDT
Whew, that about says it all in the key of C. Thanks.
Rob Appell Jul 21, 2007, 6:58pm EDT
I think I "C" where you were going with this, cutie!
ELLEN B. Jul 21, 2007, 7:13pm EDT
So on it Elsie! Great stuff. You are good. Really good. Ellen B
Peg Doak Jul 21, 2007, 7:15pm EDT
That was brilliantly done Elsie! Wow! I am soooo impressed! You didn't just use c's. You told a powerful story
Marge H. Jul 21, 2007, 7:28pm EDT
clever and cute.
Sue * Jul 21, 2007, 7:35pm EDT
Oh my gosh...she's at it again!
Larry H. Jul 21, 2007, 7:39pm EDT
thanks for sharing...
lynn a. Jul 21, 2007, 8:52pm EDT
Elsie, There's never a time we don't need to be reminded to cherish our children and how we should be slow to chide them. Thank you for this. I feel better already, and I'm no child.
Cindy K. Jul 21, 2007, 8:52pm EDT
Wow! Charmingly chosen content, Elsie! (That took me 15 minutes! lol)
Lynn R. Jul 21, 2007, 9:44pm EDT
Good Lord, I don't know how you do this. I'm stumped just looking at it. AWESOME Elsie, as always. 10 from me!!
Cherri K. Jul 21, 2007, 10:39pm EDT
cool creation! :)
Mary (diet dr pepper junkie) T. Jul 21, 2007, 11:19pm EDT
Another great entry, Elsie!
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Jul 22, 2007, 12:06am EDT
Clever one...
Minakshi w. Jul 22, 2007, 2:16am EDT
Elsie, you are so right in the message here. Children need all our love and careful handling.
I really admire your brilliant sense of putting in alliteration and a message for all parents in this piece.
Kimberly Ripley Jul 22, 2007, 10:48am EDT
Excellent! (Both the writing and child-rearing advice!!)
Sheila Deeth Jul 22, 2007, 2:56pm EDT
That was great Elsie. How do you do it? All those c words, and a message, and a fun read...
Paula Love Jul 22, 2007, 4:54pm EDT
Wow! very nicely done
Donald M. Jul 22, 2007, 4:54pm EDT
Dont really know how you do all that. It is so good, Keep up the good work Elsie.............Norma
Heidi M. Jul 23, 2007, 12:11am EDT
you amaze me!
Karolyn Q. Jul 23, 2007, 12:35pm EDT
Very good Elsie!

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Sheila Deeth Jul 23, 2007, 1:03pm EDT
Oh definitely looking forward to your next one Elsie!
William Dotani Jul 24, 2007, 1:50am EDT
Chiding to caressing. What a wonderful play on words.
William Dotani Jul 24, 2007, 4:11am EDT
I C what you mean.
Barbara B. Jul 24, 2007, 5:56pm EDT
William I was going to say that, no fair!
Confusing a child by chiding then to go
and calm them by caressing. This was a
great one Elsie and must have take just
a few minutes of your time to compose!
You never cease to amaze me Elsie!
Barbara B. Jul 24, 2007, 5:58pm EDT
Awww I do not like errors! It should
read 'must have taken just a few'.
wiaka's just ... curious Jul 29, 2007, 3:23am EDT
Can we have that in another letter?

Excellent and explosive.

Blessings

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