Giddy

I am inspired

by constellations,

fallen,

as diamonds

cast,

reflecting galaxies,

gravitating,

around a focal point

of light -

the light

of your eyes,

mesmerizing,

making me

fall,

as a drunken fool,

in love with you.

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Anne B. Grote Jul 19, 2007, 12:07pm UTC

lovely connection - your love and the universe!

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Apryl Just Apryl Jul 19, 2007, 3:17pm UTC

I could almost feel myself floating in the cosmo's. Lovely!

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Sheila Deeth Jul 19, 2007, 3:24pm UTC

Lovely - diamonds, stars, love. Beautiful.

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MW Q. Jul 20, 2007, 5:38am UTC

Love does make the world brighter, Virginia! I like the way you have portrayed the galaxies and yourself falling..around a focal point. Unique, I must say.

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amanda w. Jul 20, 2007, 10:15am UTC

Wonderful cosmic imagery to symbolize love's intensity. Beautiful!

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Elsie Duggan Jul 20, 2007, 4:42pm UTC

I feel like I am in love with life and everything around me after reading this lovely poem, perhaps all the stars in the heavens are aligned just right.

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William Dotani Jul 21, 2007, 5:12am UTC

Like the notes of Bach's decending images of love. Very very nice.

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Faith is ready to be creative and enjoy her life! Jan 22, 2008, 7:52pm UTC

oh that is so romantic!!
nice comparison.

I'm stopping as a member of Comment Speedway. Glad I found you and your article.

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Rachel Q. Apr 9, 2008, 1:52am UTC

So cute.. I wish I had that feeling in my life.

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holly s. Apr 9, 2008, 5:25am UTC

wonderful!

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Krissy spreading my wings hoping to soar W. Apr 9, 2008, 6:12am UTC

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