Dear Baby Mine

interesting article. very informative. Don't you LOVE Gather Glitches! No title and no text. I am sure this will be great once it posts right!

I think I got it now, so I hope you get to come back and read it

Lovely job Lisa!

very nice. Very nice.

That was so sweet.

I thought it was very sweet and very well worded.

That is very good! It is always exciting to hear of parents who want to raise their children in the Lord's love.

beautiful! This would make a beautiful wall hanging and a great page in the baby's scrapbook. I have a few suggestions, if you are interested:

toward does not have an "s" (towards is conversational, but not grammatically correct - optional change depending on the feel you are wanting.)

you have a typo on parents - needs ' (parent's)

Consider this:

to ease them through darkness and much pain

until we all join in the everlasting again.

Though technically, pain and again are visual rhymes in the American dialect. I think it doesn't matter though - often the reader understands that they need to make the rhyme work and will switch to the dialect that makes the rhyme work. I don't think it is off, considering that. For all we know, you are Brittish. Congrats on the new baby and thanks for sharing your beautiful poem!

10**********
Amen
Thank you for this lovely article of your's. you can be so proud for raising your children in a christian foundations is the way and God will.
A grand 10********** for you.
God Bles you and your's always. peace-love-happiness.
dee-dee

Hey,

The Germans has a word for that...repeating song in your head. It is translated as an "ear Worm" because it just keeps going around and around. One way, psychologists say, to get rid of it is to sing it outloud when you hear it. Could be difficult in a crowded elevator in North America. Of course, if you were in India or Africa, everyone else in the elevator would join in.
Cherie

You have captured the nervous anticipation of pregnancy perfectly :)