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by ONY ME
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May 13, 2007

THE AXE MAN...POEM OF A TRUE CRIME STORY

July 12, 2007 11:13 PM EDT (Updated: July 13, 2007 12:33 AM EDT)
views: 168 | rating: 9.7/10 (63 votes) | comments: 162
                    THE AXE MAN

                   Chip, chip, chip
                   as he chisels at the door,
                   what is he trying
                   to gain entry for?

                   All is quiet
                   and all are asleep,
                   so up the stairs
                   he has to creep.

                   You know not why
                   but you wake with a fright,
                   you sit up quick
                   and oh what a sight.

                   For there, in front
                   at the end of your bed,
                   stands a man with an axe
                   not a word to be said.

                   No time for reaction
                   you sweat in despair,
                   as he wields his axe
                   way up in the air.

                   As quick as a flash
                   he brings it down,
                   it's now embedded
                   in your crown.

                   He leaves as he came
                   but this time, fast,
                   for he knows your breath
                   was definitely your last.

                  But he's still out there somewhere
                  chipping at doors,
                  i wonder who's next
                  could it be yours?

       Based on a true story from the year 1918.


                            ONY 
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ONY ME Jul 12, 2007, 11:15pm EDT
Thanks Eileen for stopping by.
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Larry H. Jul 12, 2007, 11:16pm EDT
thanks for sharing.
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Miz Lynn aka/BooBoo Jul 12, 2007, 11:16pm EDT
YOWSER!! This is GREAT.
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ONY ME Jul 12, 2007, 11:19pm EDT
thanks Larry
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Ron B. Jul 12, 2007, 11:19pm EDT
Whoa ONY. I like it.
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lynn a. Jul 12, 2007, 11:20pm EDT
Ony, This is going to give me nightmares. I was riveted to the very last word.
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ONY ME Jul 12, 2007, 11:20pm EDT
thanks Lynn, nice of you to say so.
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ONY ME Jul 12, 2007, 11:21pm EDT
thanks Ron...glad u liked it, thanks fo dropping by.
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Michelle W. Jul 12, 2007, 11:22pm EDT
Wow! I would like to know the story behind this one because it is awesome!! I also give you 10!
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ONY ME Jul 12, 2007, 11:22pm EDT
lol...sorry about the nightmares Lynn but glad u liked it.
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ONY ME Jul 12, 2007, 11:24pm EDT
many thanks Michelle, it certainly is a story that plays on your mind, hence me feeling the need to write the poem.
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Lawrence U. Jul 12, 2007, 11:24pm EDT
Beautiful poem. The first stanza captures the moment very nicely, indeed. Thanks for sharing.

Sweet #10.
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ONY ME Jul 12, 2007, 11:26pm EDT
many thanks Lawrence, thanks for your comments.
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Alainia~ Tha one n only~ a. Jul 12, 2007, 11:27pm EDT
I won't have nightmares, but it was creepy!
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ONY ME Jul 12, 2007, 11:28pm EDT
lol, Alainia...i know. thanks for stopping by.
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Joe Corso Jul 12, 2007, 11:34pm EDT
Good story; sounds like the ones my brother and I told our sister when we were kids about the coal men in the basement; Now she has a fear of going into the basement; so last time I visited had to remind her of the story!!! Good thing I'm still fast and got out of the way of the skillet!!!
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Carol Roach Jul 12, 2007, 11:35pm EDT
truly excellent work
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ONY ME Jul 12, 2007, 11:35pm EDT
lol Joe....glad u liked it.
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ONY ME Jul 12, 2007, 11:36pm EDT
many thanks Carol, for your kind words.
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Denise- Marie Jul 12, 2007, 11:41pm EDT
creepy! you should send this to each summer camp for circulation.
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Randy- Being true to myself Jul 12, 2007, 11:43pm EDT
Ooooo, this is good, action packed, but also very sad that it does happen.
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ONY ME Jul 12, 2007, 11:43pm EDT
lol Denise, i might just do that. Its a good bedtime story, dont you think...lol
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ONY ME Jul 12, 2007, 11:44pm EDT
thanks for stopping by Randy.
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Sheila Deeth Jul 12, 2007, 11:48pm EDT
Scary story. But I'll stick to moths for my nightmares.
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ONY ME Jul 12, 2007, 11:50pm EDT
Dont blame you Sheila...thanks for stopping by.
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andrew c. Jul 12, 2007, 11:52pm EDT
cool poem ony
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ONY ME Jul 12, 2007, 11:56pm EDT
thanks Andrew....dont have nightmares..lol
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Dan (Cowboy Up) V. Jul 13, 2007, 12:09am EDT
Whoa! Thanks Ony..another sleepless night!! lol Reminds me of the movie "The Shining"! "Heeere's Johnny!" LOL C):-)
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 12:11am EDT
lol Dan...pleased i could disturb your sleep....my pleasure...lol
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Linda R. Jul 13, 2007, 12:22am EDT
Oooohhhhh! Very scary. Good work. Definitely a 10!
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 12:22am EDT
thanks Linda...sweet dreams...lol
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doria c. Jul 13, 2007, 1:08am EDT
Very creative! Very scarrrrreeeee. Very good!
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doria c. Jul 13, 2007, 1:11am EDT
BTW. Sleep will not be with in my grasps after this.......could he possibly be around now?
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subroto s s. Jul 13, 2007, 1:16am EDT
Ony, what a fearful story!
Told in all its glory.
It is indeed a fearful sight
The axe-man waving the axe,
with all his might.
I doubt if anyone can beaer it,
He will be dead before he is hit!
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Alison H. Jul 13, 2007, 2:29am EDT
Creepy!

Who was this guy?
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Carol Lloyd Jul 13, 2007, 3:55am EDT
Beautiful poem.
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Barbara L. Jul 13, 2007, 4:08am EDT
kinda tim burtonish!!! i likie!
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Jae F. Jul 13, 2007, 4:14am EDT
Wow! Reminds me of Jason in the Friday the 13th movies. OMG!! IT IS FRIDAY THE 13th!! EEEEEKKKK! I Love it!
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Free Spirit or the guy next door ~. Jul 13, 2007, 6:21am EDT
Here I am way down at the end.
The axe man got me my friend
Blood stained sheets and a pain in my head
Is a sure sign I must be dead...

Love the rhyme, great story content Ony but you need to lighten up a little or your never going to get any sleep....my British love. BTW to you prefer a single or double bladed axe??? I guess for today cruel world chain saws work best...
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Machiavelli Dayupay Jul 13, 2007, 6:36am EDT
HORROR, SUSPENSE AND COMEDY...
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Jerry S. Jul 13, 2007, 7:19am EDT
Not all poems have to end with happily ever after, I guess. Clever rhymes.
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Jerry Owens Jul 13, 2007, 7:31am EDT
Very nice poem Ony, thanks for sharing it with us! Would be nice to hear the whole story that motivated you to write this. Must be wild to inspire this poem.
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Missy Cline Jul 13, 2007, 8:11am EDT
yikes!!! That was excellent!
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Paul J. Jul 13, 2007, 8:14am EDT
Since I sleep on the first floor
there will be no creaking stairs as he enters the door

But my alarm will sound out in the night to signal his entry
this nasty old ax man of fright. oops.

Great scary poem ONA. Thanks.
pj
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 10:26am EDT
lol thanks Doria, thanks Subroto and thanks Lora.
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 10:28am EDT
thanks Alison, thanks Carol and Barbara for stopping by.
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 10:30am EDT
thanks Jae, Machiavelli and Jerry S.
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Christopher L. Jul 13, 2007, 10:31am EDT
absolutely grim. but no matter, it's brilliant!
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 10:32am EDT
Thanks Jerry Owens, Thanks Missy and Thanks Paul.
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 10:34am EDT
lol, Thanks Judi and Christopher for stopping by. Sorry for the grim subject...lol
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 10:37am EDT
lol Ronald, love your poem and thanks for stopping by. Now you know why im an insomniac....lol
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Christopher L. Jul 13, 2007, 10:56am EDT
ONY, I think you're one of my faves!
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 11:30am EDT
lol Christopher, what do you mean 'You Think?'.....thanks for stopping by.
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Rm V. Jul 13, 2007, 11:47am EDT
Although the poem in its entirety is beautiful, stanza five will stay with me all day - Ouch! I like your poetic style and your creative imagination - Stephen King.
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 11:54am EDT
Thanks Rm....glad you liked it. Not the usual subject matter, granted but it does play on your mind. That's how i came about writing the poem after i had read the story.
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Cindy K. Jul 13, 2007, 12:19pm EDT
Yuck!! Nicely written, though!
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Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Jul 13, 2007, 12:19pm EDT
excellent 10/10
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 12:20pm EDT
lol thanks Cindy.
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 12:21pm EDT
thanks Bhawana.
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Angela H. Jul 13, 2007, 12:43pm EDT
I love it!!!!!!!
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 12:48pm EDT
thanks Angela, glad you liked it.
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Paul M. Jul 13, 2007, 1:44pm EDT
nice poen, terrible story
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 2:02pm EDT
thanks Paul....yes it is a terrible story though. If you google 'The axe man'...you will get loads come up about the real story.
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 2:03pm EDT
Many thanks Reena, for stopping by.
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Tina Coruth Jul 13, 2007, 3:14pm EDT
Very creepy, very scary and very much a 10! Well done, Ony!!
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 3:17pm EDT
Thanks Tina, much appreciated.
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Elaine B. Jul 13, 2007, 3:39pm EDT
Very chilling and gripping...I LOVE it! Thanks!
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 3:40pm EDT
Thanks Elaine.....probably not bedtime reading....lol
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P.W. Dowdy Jul 13, 2007, 3:44pm EDT
I have missed you.

You reprieved yourself by coming up with another great one, gentle lady.
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 3:46pm EDT
lol... thanks Patricia, nice of you to say so. Thanks for taking the time to comment.
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~Lady Neeetah of California~Obama #44 W. Jul 13, 2007, 4:22pm EDT
Edgar Allan Poe resurrected. How chilling. This is good, ONY. Whew.
Too bad Alfred Hitchcock is dead, would probably use it in one of his movies.
I wouldn't sell it to Stephen King, though. King doesn't have enough class
(sorry King fans).
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~Lady Neeetah of California~Obama #44 W. Jul 13, 2007, 4:24pm EDT
ONY, I agree, I would give a DB 10 if I could, instead I am bookmarking this poem/page; it's good.
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 4:24pm EDT
lol Nalita, thanks for your kind comments. Flattery will get you everywhere...lol
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 4:26pm EDT
im even more flattered now, Nalita...lol....i have a fan!!!!
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Celeste R. Jul 13, 2007, 6:22pm EDT
I enjoyed the poem--though I am not one for cruelty, mystery stories, horror, etc.
I guess I belong with the optimists. CR
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 6:29pm EDT
many thanks Celeste for stopping by.
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Joey is a druid m. Jul 13, 2007, 7:46pm EDT
very nice poem your a good writer
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 7:54pm EDT
thanks Joey, nice of you to say.
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Stacey (Jesus is coming soon! ) U. Jul 13, 2007, 9:43pm EDT
Yikes....creepy. Well written, just CREEPY . O_O
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 9:45pm EDT
lol...thanks for stopping by Stacey.
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Cody G. Jul 13, 2007, 9:56pm EDT
I like reading suspense novels, but not often poetry. You have made me change my mind about it. Good read.
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 9:58pm EDT
thanks Cody...nice of you to stop by. Glad i could change your mind....lol
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Jerri H. Jul 13, 2007, 10:30pm EDT
Ack....Thanks for sharing!!!! 10~~~~
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Marge H. Jul 13, 2007, 10:49pm EDT
Very appropriate for Friday the 13th. Brilliantly executed.
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 11:27pm EDT
lol, Jerri....thanks for stopping by.
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ONY ME Jul 13, 2007, 11:27pm EDT
Thanks Marge, glad you liked it.
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Dawn Wright-Olivares Jul 14, 2007, 12:14am EDT
Truly chilling in a fun and gorey way! Loved it.
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ONY ME Jul 14, 2007, 12:16am EDT
lol Dawn, glad you liked it.
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Patty Mayonaise Jul 14, 2007, 12:54am EDT
great!
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ONY ME Jul 14, 2007, 1:04am EDT
thanks for stopping by Amylee.
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Elsie Duggan Jul 14, 2007, 2:00am EDT
Now that was a vivid poem, excellent
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ONY ME Jul 14, 2007, 2:01am EDT
Thanks Elsie.
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Xavier Neduveli Jul 14, 2007, 5:32am EDT
I am not much of a poet, but I liked this one. Nice work Ony.
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Terry Collett Jul 14, 2007, 9:13am EDT
creepy and good.
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Beverly M. Jul 14, 2007, 9:45am EDT
I'll lock my doors tonight. Great poem.
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ONY ME Jul 14, 2007, 12:22pm EDT
Thanka Xavier, Thanks Terry.
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ONY ME Jul 14, 2007, 12:23pm EDT
Thanks Beverly, Thanks Sylvia.
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Lucky Stars Jul 14, 2007, 1:02pm EDT
Yes, It is a creepy poem but a good read. Nice work ONY.
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ONY ME Jul 14, 2007, 1:03pm EDT
thanks Bobbi...nice of you to stop by.
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Gene F. Jul 14, 2007, 1:40pm EDT
ony, I like it very much. I gave you a 10. Please keep up the good work you did a very good job
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ONY ME Jul 14, 2007, 1:51pm EDT
Thanks Gene, much appreciated.
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