Haiku With Altered Photo Image; Water Dog
Original photo:
Nikon Coolpix 8700 Digital Camera
Altered in Photoshop Elements 4
Haiku:
Sleek chaser dripping
Fluent beauty in the sea
Water dog summer
Experimenting and playing I wasn't going to worry about making the image a standard size. Sheesh. You'd think I'd know better by now. I ended up with something I like and now to actually print it I'll want to do it in a standard photo size. If I do it again it wont be quite the same - but that should teach me good for a while, yes...
For those of you who know about Aka, this is not Aka. This is
a beach dog having fun at the beach.


Comments: 28
thank you Donna - photoshop is a tool and it's fun to play with tools i like - i can get lost in this kind of thing for hours.
Sue - thank you - and yes you do. it is fun. my camera is kaput i think - but i still have photos i can play with. so while i'm looking and thinking about a new camera i can still play with photos. in fact it opens up a little window of time for me, not to have a camera - but i miss shots i want to go after too... sheesh. ha.
thank you Julie - for a long time i've kept in the back of my mind that every piece i do - whether it is a sketch or a simple study of an idea or if something is intended as a finished piece - what ever the piece is, i am doing it so the next piece i do will be better (as one of the goals) so i hope you are right and i am going to keep working to find out. cool.
Susan J. - thank you - i enjoy the ideas and concepts behind haiku a lot and enjoy writing them - it's treasure when i get to combine words and image.
thank you Sonia - when they both work together i like where the piece goes.
thanks for the encouragement to go forward Karl. i actually know i can put two of these on a single 8x10 and do the trimming. so i think your direction is the right one to move in.
thank you Bijou - that is exactly what i am aiming for - when you tell me that, i know i've hit my goal. cool.
thanks Judi - if feels good when a piece clicks well for others - the feed back helps a lot. i'm glad you see it this way.
oh - Gale - i can definitely see your point. i prefer custom framing by far. i hope when someone buys a piece of mine they make good decisions about framing. i know my prints will last if they have good care. photos do need to be framed to be kept and displayed. when i have my own work framed i like to go all rag mat(s) - so that people will know because they can see it. i see and know the prices - or i did when i framed a lot. i dont mind the frame itself being inexpensive if it looks good - but it would be nice to have a custom framer actually cut the (rag) mat(s) and backing and put the piece together in the right way. i dont sell my prints at high prices and i think it feels funny to a buyer when the framing cost is more than the print (even if i can understand why that is so). life. even so, i am going to do some rethinking about this issue. my bigger problem comes when i sell through galleries and they double the price. that doubles the frame price again. then i find i can not sell as easily because the price gets astronomical, even when my print price is reasonable - it's an ever spinning dilemma. it would be fun to have you frame a piece some day, i'll have to keep that in mind. does your shop have a site on line?
hahahaha - thanks Anne - this image has that appeal for me too!
thank you Michele - it is and that's exactly how it should be. cool.
thank you Candace - i too am constantly learning - or i try to be - this world changes so fast now that even when i learn something i have to relearn it again just to keep up. it is a mixed issue with framing sizes. when i stopped framing my own work i began to consider the buyer cost and ease more - altho may be i have gone too far with that... - individualized sizes for each image can be extremely effective because it makes the viewer step out of the ordinary and see the image in a way that is unique starting with the framing - the cost issue is the other side of that coin. still fun to create tho, yes.
in the case of the water dog above i had plenty of space around the dog to work out a composition in a variety of ways. composition is always important to me. sometimes working within limitations is a good thing. sometimes there are good reasons to abandon the limitations. i like to work each piece on it's own needs and strengths and requirements. technology is so amazing now that there are often multiple possibilities that can work.
thanks Karolyn - i appreciate your time to look and comment and i'm glad you find the work appealing.
way cool Jessie - thank you. i like how you reacted to this piece. it feels that way to me too.
And who is Aka?
Thanks Selene - i like the spirit of fun in this too.
Sheila - there are some nice things about black velvet and painting, yes. hahahaha. fun things too. - Aka is a 90 lb. black (reverse brindle) pound dog who accepts me as a pack member. Aka means "Shadow" in the Hawaiian language.
thank you Maryann C. - i like the way this came out too.
Thanks Toni V. - for me the two bring a perspective to each that would not be there otherwise. i like that.
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