Happy feet relax
Paying homage to the sky
Free and naked now.

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Lucky Stars
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May 17, 2007 Happy Feet: Haiku w/photo
July 06, 2007 10:41 PM EDT
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Happy feet relax Paying homage to the sky Free and naked now.
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Comments: 16
Oh, sorry, I really loved your Haiku!
Per Tracey's question - I have been taught you must use either 3-5-3 (syllables per line) or 5-7-5, but recently read a book about haiku that changed all that. It was more forgiving of stanza length, etc. I'll have to go back and look it up. ;o)
www.haikupoetry4us.gather.com
sky may fall alone on me
I am an owl k
:>)
JC
Dancing in the summer wind
Cool recreation!