first kiss memories

silently you move

toward me

my heart races

our dry mouths

water

silence broken by

thumping hearts

velvet soft lips

pressing until they

hurt

this is the kiss

the very first one

under the stars

on the wet

grass

in the darkness

wet mouths

find one another

holding on until

forever

so I remember

you and me

sweet and tender

naive and wanting

youthful

Comments: 16

Nancy S. Jul 6, 2007, 10:03am EDT

Very evocative, Corina. And yes, you are a night owl....

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Elsie Duggan Jul 6, 2007, 10:38am EDT

Well described first kiss, mine was much different so I will write about it sometime, thanks for the group, another idea another place to go.

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Vinay Benjamin Jul 6, 2007, 11:17am EDT

Very expressive Corina - reminds me of a time of innocence and thank you for the group invite.

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Austin Cushing Jul 6, 2007, 1:11pm EDT

Aww - very sweet.

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Elaine M. Jul 6, 2007, 10:53pm EDT

You have a lovely romatic vision! All I remember about that first one was thinking, "Is that all there is to it?" It was the smashed, closed lips variety--nothing nearly as nice as what you describe, lol

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Elsie Duggan Jul 7, 2007, 1:40am EDT

Well Corina, you inspired me to remember my first kiss and that was it. May write about other more intimate kisses sometime. Did do a poem awhile back, Anotomy of a Kiss, much racier than this one. I think it got buried quickly like some things do.
Thanks for your comment.

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Tracey W. Jul 7, 2007, 11:53am EDT

Beautiful. You've done such a good job of describing the progression of that first passionate kiss. You make me remember one such kiss not so many month ago.