Run to the mountain, the pond, to Walden: run on two-year old legs that crouch in the sand as we laugh and scoop sand-buckets for sand castles. Run fast before time steals, shifts in my mind's eye.
Run to the mountain, the pond, to Walden: your blond hair swipes your brow; you're taller now, as we laugh and scoop sand-buckets for sand castles, and build a fort to be safe from the fast-swooping tide. Here we are safe, at Walden, a pond: no dark tide laps your dreams, engulfs our mountain landform of valleys, rivulets and moat. Run fast, fast before time steals, shifts in my mind's eye.
Run to the mountain, the pond, to Walden: years ago, we worked out our problems and crouched on too-tall legs as we laughed and scooped sand-buckets for sand castles, building dreams I worried might never be. Run fast, fast, fast before time steals, shifts again in my mind's eye.
Last year I let you go as a dandelion to the wind: a zillion, tiny follicles, hair-breath images of you I breathed to freedom, to your never-never land of college.
Run to the mountain, the pond, to Walden: come back now and run quickly, so very, very quickly on sturdy, strong legs that will crouch in the sand as we laugh and scoop sand-buckets for sand castles, before time steals again, shifts in my mind's eye: this time, it's childhood's last hurrah, and we cry one last time - before time becomes vapor, a memory of all we've lived through and disappears forever, wending upward into the night sky.
Copyright © 2007, Kathryn Esplin-Oleski


Comments: 52
Perfect for summer, I think.
Beautifully written.
Thank you Cheryl
Rose, thank you.
thank you alaina
Here is an article about Thoreau with some pictures from Wikipedia.
Thoreau and Walden
Always good to see a prose poem well done like this.
The mind can wander wherevever it wishes to go ... but the 'Pen' will always have the power to 'revisit' at will!
Marvelous piece of writing ... you are blessed!
Love 'n' God Bless,
L. Curt Erler aka "Southside Kid"
I like what Lost Soul said, and I echo him: This poem is charming and enormously appealing on all levels, as a revisioning of an entire lifetime, as a definitive goodbye of a sort, as the tip of the iceberg of a tremendous wave of feeling the reader can intuit, and as a vivid anchoring of a loving subjectivity in a specific sense of place, Walden Pond. The fact that it constantly teeters on the edge of a cloying sentimentality but fails to fall into bathos gives this poem a great lyrical satisfaction that I think all the readers that came before me as well as myself all felt instantly.
Greetings from Spain. I hope you have a wonderful week of writing, K!