Red, White and Blue (haiku)

Comments: 14

Gorgeous Gabby, a Gather Geeky Gal, and The Giz Jul 2, 2007, 1:06am EDT

Wow, very poignant! Great work!

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Jean E. Jul 2, 2007, 7:10am EDT

perfection - smiling here ~j

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Anne B. Grote Jul 2, 2007, 10:14am EDT

a red-white-blue triumph!

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~JOY ~bringing it 2 every1 she knows ;-) H. Jul 5, 2007, 10:44pm EDT

Beautiful and perfect for summer.
Rated 10.

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Denise- Marie Jul 6, 2007, 12:21am EDT

Debi, Jean, Anne and Joy;
Thank you for your kind comments!

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David D. Jul 18, 2007, 7:06pm EDT

It's amazing how much can be said by saying so little. Poetry rocks.

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Jill K. Jul 18, 2007, 10:47pm EDT

that was beautiful

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William Dotani Aug 4, 2007, 1:31am EDT

I think the last one is quite good.

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Rory M. Aug 6, 2007, 11:52pm EDT

This is probably the most artful Americanization of a Japanese art form I have ever seen. Well done.

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Denise- Marie Aug 7, 2007, 5:38pm EDT

Rory: Thanks very much, for the wonderful comment , I appreciate the compliment but now I feel compelled to direct you to some really good Haiku...It's out there !

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Denise- Marie Aug 10, 2007, 10:36pm EDT

Thanks Michelle- all you have to do is like it..on any level..and it is a success! If you ever want to learn about simple poetic techniques, send me an email and it will be my pleasure to go over it with you . I'm not an expert but I'm sure I can give you some info...maybe even turn You into a poet!

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