by Corina Carrasco
Member since:
August 16, 2006

Sad Surrender~TWC, 50 worder

June 30, 2007 03:53 AM EDT
views: 21 | comments: 11

She listened.  She thought.  She told him what would make him feel good.  She said the things he needed to hear.  She thought about what she needed and about how much she loved him.  She let a tear out,  then she put it all away for that sweet, sad surrender.

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Comments: 11

Virginia M. Jun 30, 2007, 5:00am EDT
Good 50 words!
Cheryl W. Jun 30, 2007, 9:52am EDT
Excellent! So much said in 50 words.
Elsie Duggan Jun 30, 2007, 12:11pm EDT
Excellent use of the two word challange Corina, and so much said in so few words, wonderful.
Richard Melendez Jun 30, 2007, 2:20pm EDT
Corina... A poignant read and I love the way the last line flows as you squeeze out the last bit of exquisite emotion.
Nancy S. Jun 30, 2007, 4:33pm EDT
This breaks my heart.
Sue D. Jul 1, 2007, 11:11pm EDT
Many times I have done this...

Nice work Corina.
Austin Cushing Jul 3, 2007, 1:45am EDT
Hmmm... came out nicely.
Kelly M. Jul 3, 2007, 3:56am EDT
You certainly said a lot without saying too much! Great work!
Mikal *A Four Year Smithie* M. Jul 3, 2007, 10:33pm EDT
Ugh! Brilliant! Especailly the end...Sad Surrender...couldn't have said it better...not even with more than 50!
Beverly P. Jul 30, 2007, 1:38am EDT
Great fifty! Thanks for sharing. I'm enjoying this "trend" I've just found with the 50 word group!
Cortney R. Oct 1, 2007, 6:18pm EDT
That was really good.

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