by Virginia M.
Member since:
August 31, 2006

Dying Embers

June 28, 2007 02:39 PM EDT (Updated: June 28, 2007 02:50 PM EDT)
views: 15 | comments: 10

 

I cast the ashes

of our romance

out upon the wind,

and pray the rain

will quench the flame.

 

 

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Comments: 10

Virginia M. Jun 28, 2007, 3:12pm EDT
Amy, thanks so much! Your comments make me strive harder to produce better work:)
Cheryl W. Jun 28, 2007, 3:17pm EDT
This is wonderful, Virginia! I love poems such as this that can say so much in such a few beautiful words. Well done.
Barbra L. Jun 28, 2007, 8:20pm EDT
You've created a remarkable image that is easily entertained with your well-written verse, Virginia. The format seems especially appropriate for this romantic brevity. Well done!!
Elsie Duggan Jun 29, 2007, 1:15am EDT
beautiful poem Virginia, few words, much said.
K D. Jun 29, 2007, 7:29am EDT
Great writing, Virginia. You have said quite a bit in a small amount of words. You get a 10 + from me. Keep up the good work!
Anne B. Grote Jun 29, 2007, 11:00am EDT
right to the point! with precision!
Richard Melendez Jun 30, 2007, 5:02am EDT
Virginia... you reveal such a strong emotion in so few words; the mark of a poet.
Virginia M. Jun 30, 2007, 5:21am EDT
I take all your kind words to heart! Thank you all so very much!!
oh goodness.
if there is still a flame why not keep it kindled?
very strong and to the point.

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