by Lawrence U.
Member since:
January 10, 2007

Winter Fragrance

June 26, 2007 08:48 PM EDT
views: 74 | rating: 10/10 (24 votes) | comments: 22
 

The red kangaroo

Wading through the dreamtime…

Sprouting winter

 

You

Light my fire

With gusto…

The sound of winter

 Fragrance

 

Birth of ambition…

The bright chaos of the night

Transformed

 

The blaze

Of light in the dark 

Heart of winter…

Scent of the pink

Flower foretold

 

Sing to me, Gemini,

A deep and dazzling

Song of joy

 

 

 

In the inner glow

Of winter, the lost boy sows

The seed of wonder…

Drawing the magic words from

The sensitive tongue of Desire

 

 

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Comments: 22

ELLEN B. Jun 26, 2007, 8:51pm EDT
I have so many images in my mind from this !! It really can take your mind away to a safe and lovely place. Keep it up. Fabulous!!Ellen B.
Sandy F. Jun 26, 2007, 9:12pm EDT
Your natural style is so close to haiku, the simplicy, the beauty... I love it.
Carol Lloyd Jun 26, 2007, 9:28pm EDT
thanks for sharing
Debbie H. Jun 26, 2007, 9:52pm EDT
Mesmerizing!!!
Audrey F. Jun 26, 2007, 9:58pm EDT
Unique and lovely images, Lawrence. A most sensual and enchanting poem. :)
Michele (Misha) B. Jun 26, 2007, 9:59pm EDT
The images keep coming as you read it. It's beautiful.
donna h. Jun 26, 2007, 11:11pm EDT
nice
Anne Marie A. Jun 26, 2007, 11:58pm EDT
I like the imagery in your poem as well. It is enchanting and lovely
Jerri H. Jun 27, 2007, 10:50pm EDT
Thanks for sharing!
In the inner glow

Of winter, the lost boy sows

The seed of wonder…

Drawing the magic words from

The sensitive tongue of Desire



this was especially nice!
good job!
Trudy P. Jun 28, 2007, 5:35pm EDT
Lovely! Great poem, thank you for sharing it with us. 10

I'm behind on my comments, so now I'm trying to catch up.....
Elsie Duggan Jun 28, 2007, 6:11pm EDT
Wonderful poem Lawrence, beautifully writen, simply but so expressive, I enjoyed reading it
Lisa M. Jun 29, 2007, 12:22pm EDT
wonderful use of imagery - beautifully done :)

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richard d. Jul 5, 2007, 3:31am EDT
awww very cute
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Jul 10, 2007, 7:08pm EDT
Romantic...

P.S My hubby loves your icon...
Barbi P. Jul 12, 2007, 9:39am EDT
Very pretty
Tina Coruth Jul 30, 2007, 1:38pm EDT
You have a beautiful style of writing poetry!
Marge H. Aug 21, 2007, 9:42pm EDT
Erotic and lovely.
Jerri H. Mar 11, 2008, 9:59pm EDT
Almost seems the fire of life fights winter's slumber~
Curt L. May 13, 2008, 8:26pm EDT
As Debbie observed this really is mesmerizing! Fantastic!
Abby N. Aug 24, 2008, 3:05am EDT
ten!
.* Sandi * Nov 4, 2008, 7:12pm EST
Wonderfully done! Lawrence!
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