by Sue D.

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December 16, 2006

pieces

June 12, 2007 04:49 PM EDT

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He came

like a theif

in the night

and stole

pieces of me.

leaving a mask

to wear

in return.

Veiled in silence

I search for him

only to find

imposters donning

his disguise

at every turn.

At last

he is found

and I return

his crumpled mask,

his gift

before his feet

and demand

my right

to peace.

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Comments: 17

Carol P. Jun 12, 2007, 4:57pm EDT

I really like this Sue.

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It's Not Me w. Jun 12, 2007, 4:58pm EDT

Your poem is powerful, Sue. Beautiful too.

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Otelia S. Jun 12, 2007, 6:11pm EDT

This is nice. Thanks for posting.
10 **********

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Teresa L. Jun 12, 2007, 7:31pm EDT

Wow, this is a strong piece! Thank you for sharing it.

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Sue D. Jun 12, 2007, 7:50pm EDT

I am glad that it conveys strength. Thank you Teresa.

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Charles D. Jun 12, 2007, 11:04pm EDT

I liked it Sue. Great poetry. TEN!!!

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Trish A. Jun 13, 2007, 2:13am EDT

This is a poem of strength. I think it could find a home in a Woman's Journal. Thank you so much for sharing this.

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Sue D. Jun 13, 2007, 2:33am EDT

What a nice thing to say trish. Thanks!

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Shane B. Jun 13, 2007, 3:54am EDT

Most Beautiful, from the heart Thank you Sue

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Stan H. Jun 13, 2007, 3:50pm EDT

Hey Sue: thats some good piece of work here.
It shows your inner strength. You are stronger than what you think.
Keep praying.

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Sue D. Jun 13, 2007, 11:04pm EDT

I am glad that you are moved and touched by the poem Ann. Thanks! I love hugs.

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Susan S. Jun 14, 2007, 12:16pm EDT

Here is another hug because this says so much.

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Sue D. Jun 15, 2007, 9:57am EDT

Loving the hugs... Thanks Susan!

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Shannon E. Jun 16, 2007, 12:06am EDT

Love it! Thanks!

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Gina B Jun 17, 2007, 3:03am EDT

Sue, this is beautiful! It really shows your strength~I was deeply moved.

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Alison H. Dec 15, 2007, 2:30am EST

Good poem. Yeah, give the mask back.

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