Feeling Sadness

June 10, 2007 03:56 PM EDT

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If the eyes are the window to the soul

When you look in mine you’ll see my soul is crying.

If you listen to me speak

You will hear my heart is broken.

If you take a moment you will see

My spirit is shattered.

Hope is lost.

Dreams are waylaid… forever.

Faith is faltering.

If only you would see me.

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Comments: 6

John G. Jun 10, 2007, 4:42pm EDT

Sometimes in the darkest night comes the brightest light.
hope you feel better soon.

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Claudia B. Jun 10, 2007, 8:18pm EDT

But, you have found a venue for all of us to help you find a place to be able to express your feelings and we support you as you refind your faith and center.

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Deb J. Jun 10, 2007, 10:35pm EDT

I agree with John. I have just come through about 2 years of heartbreak(s) but I made it!! You can too. Do it for your children. God Bless!!!

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Carol Lloyd Jun 12, 2007, 6:55pm EDT

thanks for sharing

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Karolyn Q. Jun 17, 2007, 2:33pm EDT

Nicely written. I hope you are feeling better soon.

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Erica Hidvegi Dec 18, 2008, 7:25pm EST

he or she has if in your dreams this person still comes to visit. Mine has recently left me behind for supposedly more tasteful waters, so be it drown if you have to I found my bouy in my writing and you have too. Sounds like you are even freer then me when my shackles first were discovered, could be removed . . . Happy Holidays and great stuff here !

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